Writing Task 1 Evaluation Required!

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darkside
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Writing Task 1 Evaluation Required!

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Hi All,

I would really appreciate if anyone can provide evaluation and feedback with band for writing task 1.

Thanks in advance.

Topic: Letter of complaint
Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:
- introduce yourself
- explain what the problem is
- suggest solutions to the problem

Response:
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to complain about the construction been done and the noise it generates as a result day and night.

My name is Haris Shuja and I live adjacent to Anas Ibn Malek Street, where all the construction for the new optical fiber cable is under progress, due to which I am extremely upset.

The main problem is noises generated by all the heavy machinery and digging of the ground which starts 6:00 am in the morning and continues until late night. I am unable to sleep in the morning and unable to relax after coming back from office.

I would advise the council to take a serious note of this situation and complete this construction as soon as possible. While the work is under development, it would be advisable to adjust the timings from 8:00 am in the morning to 5:00 pm in the evening.

If you require further clarification, do not hesitate to contact. Thank you in advance, hoping this problem will be resolved soon.

Yours faithfully
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