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kiaconchim
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Task 1 Graph line

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Write at least 150 words.

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The graph illustrates the amount of money spent on books in 4 countries over a ten-year period.

Overall, people in all countries that are mentioned tended to buy more books from 1995 to 2005. It is clear that the German kept being in the first place in terms of investments on books over the period shown, followed by the French. Italy started at the third place in 1995, but was overcome by Austria in 2005.

In 1995, about 80 millions dollars were spent on books in Germany. The figures were 55 millions and 50 millions dollars for France and Italy respectively. The importance of books were not acknowledged by Austrian people at that time, since they invested only 30 millions for books.

Germany, Italy and Austria experienced slight fluctuations from 1997 to 2003. Money spent on books in Germany reached around 97 millions dollars in 2005. France gradually increased their figure to about 75 millions in the same year. The most significant jump of the period belonged to Austria, where their number jumped to 72 millions in 2005, overtaking Italy at just above 50 millions.
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Re: Task 1 Graph line

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kiaconchim wrote:
The graph illustrates the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Overall, people in all countries that are mentioned tended to buy more books from 1995 to 2005.(<--Reword to: "Throughout the study, the amount spent on books increased for all four countries.") It is clear that Germany spent the most, followed by the French. Italy started at the third place in 1995, but was overcome by Austria in 2005.(<--Reword to: "In 1995, Italy was third in amount spent, but dropped to fourth by 2005, overtaken by Austria.")

In 1995, about 80 millions dollars was spent on books in Germany. This figure was 55 million and 50 million dollars for France and Italy respectively. The importance of books was not acknowledged by Austrian people at that time, since they invested only 30 million in books.

Germany, Italy and Austria experienced slight fluctuations from 1997 to 2003. Money spent on books in Germany reached around 97 million dollars in 2005. France gradually increased their figure to about 75 million in the same year. The most significant jump of the period belonged to Austria, which increased from 30 million in 1995 to 72 million in 2005, overtaking Italy at just above 50 million.
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Re: Task 1 Graph line

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Thanks a lot Flick :)
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