URGEEEENT!!!! PLEASE ALL INSTRUCTORS/EXAMINERS/STUDENTS RAT

[Robeena]

Dear, EVERYONE! I have my IELTS test aftertomorrow on Saturday, January 17th ! so I just want anyone to rate my task 1 response whether it is a band 5 or 6 or 7 etc !!! just to feel comfortable and not worry plus correct my misakes which i have before its too latee!!!!

Here is my response! and the TASK 1 QUESTION is on http://www.ielts.org ... which is the only task one bar chart question on it..
here is the link for it if you wanna save time searching for it http://www.ielts.org/PDF/120430_academi ... ask_1A.pdf
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The bar chart above illustrates the number of British students (male, female) in further education in three different years, divided into two groups, either obtaining a full-time or part-time education.

Overall, female students by far has seen the highest rate of education and their level of education swelled by time. By contrast

[Robeena]

sorry guys I meant RATEEEEE***** not a rat lol

[AwolsESL]

Hi... can't seem to see all of your response but just to make 2 quick points about your first sentence...
You don't need to say above or below... as in the graph above illustrates...
Look at your answer, is there a chart above it? no... it's on a separate piece of paper.
Secondly... divided into two groups - well what groups?

A good task one response should mean that the examiner would not need to look at the chart or diagram (if he wasn't examining you).