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priyankabhatta
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Advantages and Disadvantages of mobile phone:-

It is not a secret things that now a days mobile phones have transformed lives of nearly everyone on the planet.If we discuss about it's benefits or advantages,then we can easily find out it's good will.People are communicate with their family,friends,coworkers from anywhere.Now we are using mobile phones more than computers.We can easily get our mail trough mobile phones without using computer.Mobile phone has different applications like digital camera,mp3,calculator,daily planner,text messaging,voice recorder ,GPS systems with constant internet access all-in-one device.Smart phones also become very popular now,it's a mobile phone an operating systems.

Other hand , it's affect on human health.Continuous talking over phone it's increase cancer.It's also affect on young generation.They are spending times talking over the phone,chatting with friends and playing games,which is hamper on their studies.Depending on mobile phones man becomes isolated.Since humans are social creatures by their nature who need real life connections,this runs the risk of becoming a huge problem of society.Some are using mobile phones fulfilling their bad intentions.mobile phone leads to some pretty accident.Talking over mobile while crossing road or driving or walking on road ,leads serious accident.

In conclusion we can say that, use this device as a useful things ,then we shall be able to enjoy all the helpful things.


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