Overeating is harmful, November 2014 writing question answer

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Question: Do you agree or disagree. Research show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, advertising of certain food products must be banned like smoking adverts

Nowadays, new restaurants and food chains are becoming common and food business has become a grooming business. Most of the restaurants are attracting more and more peoples through advertisements and deal packages. It is believed that advertisement of certain food items should be banned. This will be argued on the basis of diseases which are caused by overeating and due to expensive food at restaurants.
Firstly, advertisement cause people to consume more food and consequently become overweight. Overweight is the main cause of major life threatening diseases. Take for an instance heart attack which is caused by over weight. Similarly diabetes, cholesterol and high blood pressure are also caused by overeating. Therefore banning advertisement will cause less number of people to overeat and ultimately there will be a decrease in number of cases related to life threatening diseases. Hence after analyzing the above example it is obvious that advertisement of certain food items must be banned.
Secondly, food at hotels is too expensive and it is a waste of resources. For example, it takes millions of rupees to develop and publish a TV commercial. As well as huge resources are pour into marketing campaign. At the end of the day all these expenses are beard by the consumer of the food in the form of huge bills. Therefore, consuming food at hotels is wastage of resources. Hence, it is clear that advertisement related to specific food items should be banned.
In conclusion, overweight complications due to overeating as well as wastage of resources, advertisement of food items is harmful to society. It is agreed that advertisement of food items should be banned permanently. It is recommended that awareness program related to overeating should be started and new policies should be made for advertisement related to food products.

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Question: Do you agree or disagree. Research show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, advertising of certain food products must be banned like smoking adverts

Nowadays, new restaurants and food chains are becoming common and the food industry is booming. Many restaurants are attracting more and more customers through advertisements and deal packages. It is believed that the advertisement of certain food items should be banned. This will be argued on the basis of diseases which are caused by overeating due to expensive food at restaurants.

Firstly, advertising causes people to consume more food and consequently become overweight. Obesity is the main cause of major life threatening diseases. Take, for instance, heart attacks which are caused by obesity. Similarly diabetes, cholesterol and high blood pressure are also caused by overeating. Therefore, banning advertisements willlead to a decrease in the number of people who overeat and ultimately there will be a decrease in the number of cases related to life threatening diseases. Hence, after analyzing the above example it is obvious that advertisements of certain food items must be banned.

Secondly, food at hotels is too expensive and it is a waste of resources. For example, it takes millions of rupees to develop and publish a TV commercial. As well as the huge amount of resources that are poured into marketing campaigns. At the end of the day, all these expenses are paid by the consumer of the food in the form of huge bills. Therefore, consuming food at hotels is a waste of resources. Hence, it is clear that advertisements related to specific food items should be banned.

In conclusion, health complications due to overeating as well asthe wastage of resources show that advertisements of food items is harmful to society. It is agreed that advertisements of food items should be banned permanently. It is recommended that an awareness program related to overeating should be started and new policies should be made for advertisements related to food products.

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