The bar chart compares the percentage of computer ownership according to level of education attained between 2002 and 2010.
It is clear that there was a significant rise in all the platforms given over the 8 year period. It is also evident that as the education levels up, the proportion of computer ownership rises.
In 2002, post graduate students accounted the highest percentage ownership among the other four level of education, with around 70 percent, which is twice as high as that of high school graduates ownership, at below 40 percent only. The number of computer ownership among high school graduates accounted the lowest, at over 10 percent.
By 2010, there was about 20 percent increase each in the figures for computer ownership in students with post graduate qualification and with bachelor’s degree. By contrast, the proportion for high school graduate, and for both high school and college undergraduate dramatically rose by at least 30 percent each.
WT1 - BAR CHART
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The bar chart compares the percentage of computer ownership according to level of education attained between 2002 and 2010.
The bar chart compares the number of students, who owned a computer, during the years of 2002 and 2010.
It is clear that there was a significant rise in all the platforms given over the 8 year period. It is also evident that as the education levels up, the proportion of computer ownership rises.
In 2002, post graduate students accounted the highest percentage ownership among the other four level of education, with around 70 percent, which is twice as high as that of high school graduates ownership, at below 40 percent only. The number of computer ownership among high school graduates accounted the lowest, at over 10 percent.
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By 2010, there was about 20 percent increase each in the figures for computer ownership in students with post graduate qualification and with bachelor’s degree. By contrast, the proportion for high school graduate, and for both high school and college undergraduate dramatically rose by at least 30 percent each.
The bar chart compares the number of students, who owned a computer, during the years of 2002 and 2010.
It is clear that there was a significant rise in all the platforms given over the 8 year period. It is also evident that as the education levels up, the proportion of computer ownership rises.
In 2002, post graduate students accounted the highest percentage ownership among the other four level of education, with around 70 percent, which is twice as high as that of high school graduates ownership, at below 40 percent only. The number of computer ownership among high school graduates accounted the lowest, at over 10 percent.
********you have thrown away important data in the graph.Apart from that sentence structure is not correct. you need to rewrite it again.
By 2010, there was about 20 percent increase each in the figures for computer ownership in students with post graduate qualification and with bachelor’s degree. By contrast, the proportion for high school graduate, and for both high school and college undergraduate dramatically rose by at least 30 percent each.