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holymanbinny
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Task1, need your suggestion and band score if you can

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The diagram compares the spending habits of shoppers in four European countries on six consumer products, namely personal stereos, tennis racquets , colognes, compact disks toys and photographic film.

It can be observed that in Britain, the highest amount of money was spent on photographic film (more than 170 million pounds), while similar amount were spent on personal stereos and tennis racquets. The French spent the second highest amount of money on the first three products while they stood last in latter three. It is also revealed that Italians spent more money on toys than any other product ( a bit less than 160 million pounds), but they also paid a lot for photographic film. Finally, Germans spent the least overall, having similar spending figures for all 6 products compared in the chart.

Overall, more money was spent on toys and photographic film than on any other product. Also, the British were the biggest spender in all six categories Amon the nations compared in the bar chart while the lowest spending levels were attributed to the residents of Germany.
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holymanbinny
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Please. Give suggestion
kian
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Re: Task1, need your suggestion and band score if you can

Post by kian »

You should write about products not about countries. BTW it may be a good point if you discuss countries in the end of your writing
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