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Thanks for the comment David, I will try to put a better argument next time. However, I am concentrating more on my structuring of sentences and avoiding of awkward sentences. So, I did not pay much attention on the argument. Thanks for ur suggestions.

Thanks, Flick

Negative effects due to gloablization. what extent do you agree ? Indubitably, globalization has brought a tremendous change in the lives of people. However, it also has had negative effects on the economy. This essay will demonstrate the negative effects due to the globalization in the following pa...

There are different opinions on government's fund allocation on arts. Whilst some people believe that government wastes money on arts, others say that government should encourage arts by spending more money on it. It is agreed that government should encourage arts by allocating funds to it. This ess...

Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other thinks it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay? Teaching is one of the oldest or ancient professions in the world. Even though everyone knows the promi...

Health is definitely the most critical aspect in a person's life. Most people depend on private health care to lead a healthy life. Even though there are some advantages like partial or complete cover for medical expenses, there are some drawbacks like burden of unexpected bill payments and high pre...

As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem? Pollution is one of the ever increasing problems caused by mankind. It is high time to solve the issue. In order to tackle this problem, governm...

A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Both arts and environment are the areas which are neglected by people. However, environment is the o...

It is widely seen that youngsters nowadays are ignoring suggestions from elders. However, they should definitely learn the importance of elders' knowledge. I completely disagree with the statement that there is nothing that can be learnt from older people. This can be proved by analyzing management ...

Hey! I think you did well in reasoning etc., but you have to check your grammar. It is difficult to comprehend. I did the intro part for you.gud luck ! Space researches have been passed very developed steps towards big milestones of discovery of other plants and universe( Space research has passed m...

thanks flick Most of us are very specific when it comes to our sweet home. Even though there may be a compromise in other interests, people are very particular about living in the best one they can get. Thus,the first question which haunts them whilst searching for a house is : which one is better, ...

It is unquestionable that nowadays people are more worried about their social status and physical appearance. Frankly speaking, people tend to judge a book by its cover. For instance, a man who drives a luxury car is automatically considered ( remarked) as a wealthy man. I this case, people would ev...

Reality in books and movies will certainly draw a lot of attention from people. However, people have varied interests when coming to reading books. It is disagreed with the statement that people should only read books pertaining to reality and real life events. This essay will analyze the reasons fo...

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion. Working for different organizations is increasingly happening nowadays. Some employees think that it is a wise dec...

Hi, I have tried to find few mistakes. Even I am in the learning stage, so others can review it better. But, leaving a side task achievemnt and all other things, there are still a lot of issues in the essay. There are very few error free sentences. so practice as much as you can, gud luck :). A heal...

thanks flick, I will try to rectify those mistakes.

Internet is widely popular in today's world. Human life will be drastically effected with out internet for a day. Mostly, people are habituated to search information in the web world and they are quite happy about it. But, some people differ with this argument. This essay will explore both sides of ...

[Hey! I tried my best. Wait for other's review too. All the best Undoubtedly, professional sports personal(what is personal ?) have a celebrity status in today's world. Furthermore, young people worship them beyond imagination. Arguably, some think that famous athletes can act as a(be) role model (s...

As the motto of this forum is to help each other by correcting our mistakes, I gave a shot. But, there are people who can do better than me. Wait for their review. I tried to point out some mistakes in your essay. All the best. I think you need to practice :). The world is changing everyday in many ...

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Students nowadays are opting internships right after their studies. Even though, students does not get paid, they are getting experienced through these internships. Some believe that it is a sheer waste of time where as others think it is useful. This essay will analyze both advantages and disadvant...

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