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by danyocean
Thu May 07, 2015 7:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Stay-at-home-dad essay (Malang-Indonesia)
Replies: 2
Views: 2267

Re: Stay-at-home-dad essay (Malang-Indonesia)

Thanks a million FLICK..
You are legend
by danyocean
Thu May 07, 2015 7:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay for FLICK - TV Channels in Australia
Replies: 3
Views: 1889

Re: Essay for FLICK - TV Channels in Australia

Thanks a million. I keep practicing writing for IELTS based on your guidance and advice.
by danyocean
Thu May 07, 2015 7:57 am
Forum: Post information about your school, service or product
Topic: Free Online Webinars
Replies: 8
Views: 12531

Re: Free Online Webinars

Dr.Matthew wrote:So, here's the link to the first of the Free Webinars...a few 'teething problems' but the clarity does improve as the recording goes on:

http://www.anymeeting.com/monasharts/E159D981834B

cheers,
Thank you very much Prof. :)
by danyocean
Wed Apr 22, 2015 2:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: [Table] Report 1 Cambridge IELTS 4 Test 1
Replies: 0
Views: 660

[Table] Report 1 Cambridge IELTS 4 Test 1

For everyone, please assess my report. Thank you SkypeID: daniarsupriyadi The table compares the percentages of Australian people living in poverty in the year 1999. It is observed that the least proportion of poverty rates is experienced by dwellers who are grouped into the aged couple family, whi...
by danyocean
Wed Apr 22, 2015 1:19 pm
Forum: Post information about your school, service or product
Topic: Free Online Webinars
Replies: 8
Views: 12531

Re: Free Online Webinars

Thank you Dr.Matthew
I have sent an email to you.
by danyocean
Wed Apr 22, 2015 11:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay for FLICK - TV Channels in Australia
Replies: 3
Views: 1889

Essay for FLICK - TV Channels in Australia

Dear FLICK, please assess my essay. Thanks a million, feel free to contact me. SkypeID: daniarsupriyadi Television is a good thing, because it gives people enjoyment and keeps them informed as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Television brings significant changes in term of giving...
by danyocean
Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:53 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: IELTS Questions (18 April 2015) GMT+7 Malang Indonesia
Replies: 0
Views: 2512

IELTS Questions (18 April 2015) GMT+7 Malang Indonesia

IELTS 18 April 2015 (Malang-Indonesia) GMT+7 SkypeID: daniarsupriyadi Writing task 2: Some people believe that student who achieve the best academic results should be rewarded. Others argue that it is better to reward student who shows improvement. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Writin...
by danyocean
Fri Apr 17, 2015 12:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)
Replies: 8
Views: 18680

Re: Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)

Gotcha, Thank you very much again. :)
by danyocean
Fri Apr 17, 2015 12:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Technology & Workplaces (essay)-corrected
Replies: 2
Views: 5904

Re: Technology & Workplaces (essay)-corrected

Thank you very much FLICK
Indeed, your correction very important for everyone, for me as well.
by danyocean
Thu Apr 16, 2015 5:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)
Replies: 8
Views: 18680

Re: Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)

With pleasure Dr. DR MATTHEW PISCIONERI, it is permissible if you intend to put my essay plus its corrections/comments on your website; I would love to. :)
by danyocean
Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)
Replies: 8
Views: 18680

Re: Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)

Hi Danny, really good work here! Congrats :). In short, a couple of pieces of advice: 1. Try and find synonyms for those oft-repeated words/terms (eg. like, some, people) 2. Typically, good academic writing tends towards the understated and so ensure your adverbs aren't TOO strong. It's not a piece...
by danyocean
Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Space exploration is waste of money (?) - IELTS essay
Replies: 0
Views: 21643

Space exploration is waste of money (?) - IELTS essay

SkypeID: daniarsupriyadi - Indonesia Some people think that money spent on space exploration is a waste and could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society. To what extent do you agree? Some developed countries spent a huge sum of money on space exploration, and some people argue it is...
by danyocean
Thu Apr 16, 2015 3:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My essay - IELTS USA Academic - March 2015
Replies: 0
Views: 638

My essay - IELTS USA Academic - March 2015

SkypeID: daniarsupriiyadi - Indonesia Some people consider sport to be their career and role in the society. For others, it is mostly a workout to keep fit. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Playing sports make people stay healthy, while some people choose sports as their career and role...
by danyocean
Thu Apr 16, 2015 3:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)
Replies: 8
Views: 18680

Supermarket & local business (essay - proofreaded)

SkypeID: daniarsupriyadi - Indonesia Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or dis...
by danyocean
Tue Apr 14, 2015 5:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Written answer of IELTS test in Singapore - March 2015
Replies: 3
Views: 3933

Re: Written answer of IELTS test in Singapore - March 2015

Thank you very much FLICK
I deeply appreciate that
by danyocean
Mon Apr 13, 2015 9:00 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: 18 April 2015 - IELTS exam - Malang - Indonesia
Replies: 3
Views: 3363

Re: 18 April 2015 - IELTS exam - Malang - Indonesia

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by danyocean
Mon Apr 13, 2015 8:07 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: 18 April 2015 - IELTS exam - Malang - Indonesia
Replies: 3
Views: 3363

18 April 2015 - IELTS exam - Malang - Indonesia

Please reply this message if anyone on this forum taking ielts test in Malang city, Indonesia on Saturday 18 April 2015. I will kindly to text you for study buddy.
by danyocean
Fri Apr 10, 2015 4:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tourism and culture essay (Bali-Indonesia)
Replies: 2
Views: 5857

Re: Tourism and culture essay (Bali-Indonesia)

Thank you flick....
by danyocean
Fri Apr 10, 2015 4:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Technology & Workplaces (essay)-corrected
Replies: 2
Views: 5904

Technology & Workplaces (essay)-corrected

SkypeID: daniarsupriyadi Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology? There is no doubt that technology is being used in many workplaces. In my opinion, technology has d...
by danyocean
Mon Apr 06, 2015 6:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Written answer of IELTS test in Singapore - March 2015
Replies: 3
Views: 3933

Written answer of IELTS test in Singapore - March 2015

I'm Indonesian. Here it is a sample answer for celebrities-charity issue. skype: daniarsupriyadi Sometimes celebrities get invited to international aid events. Do you think such events deviate from their main purpose by inviting famous people? Occasionally, celebrities get involved in international ...
by danyocean
Sun Mar 08, 2015 3:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2, Academic
Replies: 3
Views: 1671

Re: Writing Task 2, Academic

Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? International sporting events, such as football World Cup, ...
by danyocean
Sun Mar 08, 2015 3:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tourism and culture essay (Bali-Indonesia)
Replies: 2
Views: 5857

Tourism and culture essay (Bali-Indonesia)

Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. People have different views about whether tourism business truly preserve or give negative impac...
by danyocean
Sat Mar 07, 2015 3:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hedging language for better academic writing
Replies: 0
Views: 944

Hedging language for better academic writing

Modal auxiliary verbs: can, could, may, might, should, would Other modal verbs: appears, look, seem, tend Probability adj: Likely, possible, probable, unlikely, supposed, presumed, Probability adv: perhaps, possibly, probably, presumably, arguably, in general, fairly, more or less, mostly, quite, so...
by danyocean
Sat Mar 07, 2015 3:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Stay-at-home-dad essay (Malang-Indonesia)
Replies: 2
Views: 2267

Stay-at-home-dad essay (Malang-Indonesia)

Q: These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? In the late 21th century, there is widespread of an evolution of family roles that a father is the main c...
by danyocean
Sat Mar 07, 2015 9:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Condition frases
Replies: 0
Views: 521

Condition frases

Providing that Government may give a soft loan to businessmen providing that they reinvest their money to develop rural areas. Unless Unless you speak fluently, you will not get a lower score in IELTS speaking As long as Environment will get better as long as you manage nicely domestic wastes On con...