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Many people think that sports stars have the right to earn a substantial amount of money since they use their talent and most valuable time to practice and exercise. Others believe that this is exaggerated and unfair. In this essay, I will discuss both points of views and give my opinion. Indeed, ma...

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Thanks Aleksandra for your valuable feedback. Its really help a lot

Thanks Flick again for your helping with grammar. I really appreciate that

Yes, if you aim to get 7, you have to work hard on grammar mistakes and improve your essay structure.

Thanks Flick your help with grammar are really appreciated.

Kinds Regards

Thanks Saqibali for the points you mentioned. I really have problem with grammar. I need to study it more. But adjectives are not important so if not use them,you get penalized in IELTs!

Many thanks Sandeep for your valuable feedback, I will reed more about grammer. The time is very short for the exam!

Good essay. But you didn't explain what are these difficulties and what the solutions!

You have to state your opinions (its an essay about your opinion) to what extend (do you agree or disagree) should children have to follow rules. Not the effect of follow these roles! Overall the essay is well-structured and you used good vocabularies but you didn't meet the question requirements!

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You probably get score 6.

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Thanks mate that is a big relief. I really appreciate it.

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