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- Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:39 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
- Replies: 8
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Re: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
Yeap,I am right,ur bodies lack of reasons :which could answer the question "WHY". It is the government’s duty to reduce tensions ----WHY??? :roll: I do not know have seen it before,however I'm going to share a link with you which is about 9 band essay!Here it is http://www.goodluckielts.co...
- Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:29 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2068
Re: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
If u have paid attention before;With the questions of essays there are kinda tasks:Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Maybe,give reasons !
Maybe,give reasons !
- Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:17 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1116
Re: Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
shit 
i see u also ve written a detailed information in ur introduction !Ur essay would get 7-7.5 if u consider also a essay structure rules!
i see u also ve written a detailed information in ur introduction !Ur essay would get 7-7.5 if u consider also a essay structure rules!- Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:14 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1116
Re: Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
Several music forms exist in the contemporary world, for example, classical, rock, semi-classical etc. ???????????????????????????????
Why are u giving examples in ur introduction ? are u stupid ?
Why are u giving examples in ur introduction ? are u stupid ?
- Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:01 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2068
Re: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
Hey there BAS.Your essay is perfect.But, i have several suggestions :) I have noticed that you have given two examples for your two bodies.It would be okay for from 7.5 to 8.0.However as you are aiming 8+ it would be good if you include examples in only one of them. Secondly the phrase "IN DETR...