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- Thu Aug 20, 2015 11:27 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Academic WT1 - Expected band = 7+
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2054
Academic WT1 - Expected band = 7+
The charts illustrate the population of people, segregated in different ages, in Yemen and Italy in 2000, and their estimated figures for 2050. Despite having slightly lower population to children, the majority of citizens in both countries are who aged 15 to 59 years old. According to the first dia...
- Fri Aug 14, 2015 12:41 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Recent ielts test questions
- Replies: 0
- Views: 2204
Recent ielts test questions
Where can i find the recent ielts test questions ???
Please share your idea.
Please share your idea.
- Thu Aug 13, 2015 12:14 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 668
Re: Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.
Thank you very much.
Oh, there is still a lots to do.
Oh, there is still a lots to do.
- Fri Jul 31, 2015 2:42 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Reading difficulties on heading and paragraph, and information finding questions..
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1638
Reading difficulties on heading and paragraph, and information finding questions..
What is the method to approach heading and paragraph, and information finding on paragraph questions ??
Please feel free to share your thoughts.
Please feel free to share your thoughts.
- Thu Jul 30, 2015 12:35 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 668
Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.
In some cultures, children are expected to follow very strict rules of behaviour. In other cultures, children are allowed to do almost anything they want. What are the merits of each opinion? What is your position on the matter? Include relevant examples in your response. Since the dawn of the huma...
- Sat Jul 25, 2015 9:31 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: You have 72 hours to enter this essay writing contest!
- Replies: 93
- Views: 43313
Re: You have 72 hours to enter this essay writing contest!
Since the dawn of the human civilization, people have been continuously practicing cultures throughout their life. However, the concept of culture is lopsided the world over. In my opinion, the tradition will be plausible if it permits the children to do whatever they want. The beneficial areas of t...
- Sun Jul 19, 2015 4:01 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 553
Re: Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2
Hi there, I can follow your logic. You are right that there are grammatical areas (some more the style of writing) scattered throughout, which you should be cautious of, for example: - ‘as the elite sport professionals are very few’, I suggest ‘there are very few elite sporting professionals’ - ‘mo...
- Sat Jul 18, 2015 1:46 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 553
Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2
While my weak area is grammar, please kindly mention your suggestions as a comment below, if you find any. Question: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfa...
- Tue Jul 07, 2015 1:57 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Letters 1, 2 (Preparation)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 728
Re: Letters 1, 2 (Preparation)
I would replace unpleasant with unplatable.
- Tue Jul 07, 2015 1:53 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please, help to check! Writing task 2 drives me to despair!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 776
Re: Please, help to check! Writing task 2 drives me to despair!
1. Try to stick to Ryan's structure; include question of your essay.
2. your Examples are not strong enough.
3.avoid personal pronouns, if your question does not ask your personal opinion.
2. your Examples are not strong enough.
3.avoid personal pronouns, if your question does not ask your personal opinion.
- Tue Jul 07, 2015 1:44 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 - "A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions"
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6729
Re: Task 2 - "A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions"
well, i have few suggestions.
1. Please include few strong examples to support your ideas on supporting paragraph.
2.your few sentences seems ambiguous; write short and precise sentences.
3.Because it does not sound academic, try to avoid personal pronouns, such as we, i, you, etc.
1. Please include few strong examples to support your ideas on supporting paragraph.
2.your few sentences seems ambiguous; write short and precise sentences.
3.Because it does not sound academic, try to avoid personal pronouns, such as we, i, you, etc.
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 7:12 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: IELTS test delayed in Nepal.
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1390
Re: IELTS test delayed in Nepal.
I heard examination was conducted in Kathmandu.
Guys, please share the updates regarding this.
Guys, please share the updates regarding this.
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:59 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1281
Re: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!
Don't use too much linkers. It is sounding robotic.
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:55 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: General Writing - Task 1 and Task 2 - Please evaluate and assist me.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1175
Re: General Writing - Task 1 and Task 2 - Please evaluate and assist me.
Try to use ";" and ":".
Use some linkers between sentences.
Use some linkers between sentences.
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:44 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT, essays 9-10. Final!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1821
Re: GT, essays 9-10. Final!
Another impressive essay.
Is it under exam condition???
Is it under exam condition???
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:41 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2063
Re: Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)
Good essay! I thoroughly enjoyed.
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:33 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: What do you make of this letter?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4239
Re: What do you make of this letter?
Absolutely perfect letter!
I enjoyed reading this.
Brother move on!
Any girls would say yes to this letter.
Oh, sorry. Its not a love letter.
In fact, i am sure examiner will love reading this one.
I enjoyed reading this.
Brother move on!
Any girls would say yes to this letter.
Oh, sorry. Its not a love letter.
In fact, i am sure examiner will love reading this one.
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:16 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8765
Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagre...
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:13 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8765
Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Essay is great.. could you give me tips to improve my Vocabulary. you have used words like Preposterous, Denounce, Ramification, Embodies.. I am pretty sure you would have gone through a lot of materials.. can u please suggest me some, so that I could try to improve and get a better IELTS Score. Th...
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:08 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8765
Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Thanks for your suggestion.tuananhchau wrote:I have only one suggestion:
' adults females' => female adults
- Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8765
Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
I think you did pretty good job. I read the introduction, and I have some notes for you in a way that we as student should help each other. 1 women have not has because women are plural. 2 have been involving not involved because you said these days which means it's still happening. 3 are seen inst...
- Wed Jul 01, 2015 3:18 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8765
Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Flick seems busy these days.
- Fri Jun 26, 2015 12:58 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1052
Re: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!
Ok very well.There are many ways to get a thing done. Because you are almost perfect on this writing section, lets move to listening. Could you help me on this listening doubts?? Answer : Clubhouse ( but i wrote "Club house" ) Will both answers be marked as correct ?? What do you think ??
- Thu Jun 25, 2015 2:54 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Listening multiple choice question.
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3457
Re: Listening multiple choice question.
I will be having my LRW exams tomorrow. I am really confused about the band calculation in listening. Someone told me that the band score calculation is different for academic and general. I am doing general. plz help me how much score i need to get for general ielts listening for the band 7.5. I l...
- Thu Jun 25, 2015 2:45 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1052
Re: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!
Hello, Gelever brother !! Well, you have strong vocabulary and essay is well structured. I think its a good band essay. However, i think i would alter somethings here in your first essay. In this essay, the advantages to both approaches will be discussed in the following order before drawing a reaso...