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by jesus
Thu Aug 20, 2015 11:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic WT1 - Expected band = 7+
Replies: 6
Views: 2054

Academic WT1 - Expected band = 7+

The charts illustrate the population of people, segregated in different ages, in Yemen and Italy in 2000, and their estimated figures for 2050. Despite having slightly lower population to children, the majority of citizens in both countries are who aged 15 to 59 years old. According to the first dia...
by jesus
Fri Aug 14, 2015 12:41 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Recent ielts test questions
Replies: 0
Views: 2204

Recent ielts test questions

Where can i find the recent ielts test questions ???

Please share your idea.
by jesus
Thu Aug 13, 2015 12:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.
Replies: 2
Views: 668

Re: Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.

Thank you very much.
Oh, there is still a lots to do.
by jesus
Fri Jul 31, 2015 2:42 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Reading difficulties on heading and paragraph, and information finding questions..
Replies: 0
Views: 1638

Reading difficulties on heading and paragraph, and information finding questions..

What is the method to approach heading and paragraph, and information finding on paragraph questions ??

Please feel free to share your thoughts.
by jesus
Thu Jul 30, 2015 12:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.
Replies: 2
Views: 668

Please flick assess my essay as fast as possible.

In some cultures, children are expected to follow very strict rules of behaviour. In other cultures, children are allowed to do almost anything they want. What are the merits of each opinion? What is your position on the matter? Include relevant examples in your response. Since the dawn of the huma...
by jesus
Sat Jul 25, 2015 9:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: You have 72 hours to enter this essay writing contest!
Replies: 93
Views: 43313

Re: You have 72 hours to enter this essay writing contest!

Since the dawn of the human civilization, people have been continuously practicing cultures throughout their life. However, the concept of culture is lopsided the world over. In my opinion, the tradition will be plausible if it permits the children to do whatever they want. The beneficial areas of t...
by jesus
Sun Jul 19, 2015 4:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 553

Re: Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2

Hi there, I can follow your logic. You are right that there are grammatical areas (some more the style of writing) scattered throughout, which you should be cautious of, for example: - ‘as the elite sport professionals are very few’, I suggest ‘there are very few elite sporting professionals’ - ‘mo...
by jesus
Sat Jul 18, 2015 1:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 553

Discussion essay - Academic writing task 2

While my weak area is grammar, please kindly mention your suggestions as a comment below, if you find any. Question: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfa...
by jesus
Tue Jul 07, 2015 1:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Letters 1, 2 (Preparation)
Replies: 2
Views: 728

Re: Letters 1, 2 (Preparation)

I would replace unpleasant with unplatable.
by jesus
Tue Jul 07, 2015 1:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please, help to check! Writing task 2 drives me to despair!
Replies: 2
Views: 776

Re: Please, help to check! Writing task 2 drives me to despair!

1. Try to stick to Ryan's structure; include question of your essay.

2. your Examples are not strong enough.

3.avoid personal pronouns, if your question does not ask your personal opinion.
by jesus
Tue Jul 07, 2015 1:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 - "A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions"
Replies: 3
Views: 6729

Re: Task 2 - "A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions"

well, i have few suggestions.

1. Please include few strong examples to support your ideas on supporting paragraph.

2.your few sentences seems ambiguous; write short and precise sentences.

3.Because it does not sound academic, try to avoid personal pronouns, such as we, i, you, etc.
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 7:12 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: IELTS test delayed in Nepal.
Replies: 1
Views: 1390

Re: IELTS test delayed in Nepal.

I heard examination was conducted in Kathmandu.
Guys, please share the updates regarding this.
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!
Replies: 4
Views: 1281

Re: Writing task 2. Please evaluate my essay!

Don't use too much linkers. It is sounding robotic.
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Writing - Task 1 and Task 2 - Please evaluate and assist me.
Replies: 4
Views: 1175

Re: General Writing - Task 1 and Task 2 - Please evaluate and assist me.

Try to use ";" and ":".
Use some linkers between sentences. ;)
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT, essays 9-10. Final!
Replies: 4
Views: 1821

Re: GT, essays 9-10. Final!

Another impressive essay.
Is it under exam condition???
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)
Replies: 5
Views: 2063

Re: Is this essay good enough for band 8? (Academic)

Good essay! I thoroughly enjoyed. :twisted:
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What do you make of this letter?
Replies: 5
Views: 4239

Re: What do you make of this letter?

Absolutely perfect letter!
I enjoyed reading this.
Brother move on!

Any girls would say yes to this letter. :D
Oh, sorry. Its not a love letter. :D

In fact, i am sure examiner will love reading this one.
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Replies: 13
Views: 8765

Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.

The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagre...
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Replies: 13
Views: 8765

Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.

Essay is great.. could you give me tips to improve my Vocabulary. you have used words like Preposterous, Denounce, Ramification, Embodies.. I am pretty sure you would have gone through a lot of materials.. can u please suggest me some, so that I could try to improve and get a better IELTS Score. Th...
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Replies: 13
Views: 8765

Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.

tuananhchau wrote:I have only one suggestion:
' adults females' => female adults :mrgreen:
Thanks for your suggestion.
by jesus
Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.
Replies: 13
Views: 8765

Re: Women and child care - please assess my Academic WT2 as soon as possible.

I think you did pretty good job. I read the introduction, and I have some notes for you in a way that we as student should help each other. 1 women have not has because women are plural. 2 have been involving not involved because you said these days which means it's still happening. 3 are seen inst...
by jesus
Fri Jun 26, 2015 12:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!
Replies: 4
Views: 1052

Re: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!

Ok very well.There are many ways to get a thing done. Because you are almost perfect on this writing section, lets move to listening. Could you help me on this listening doubts?? Answer : Clubhouse ( but i wrote "Club house" ) Will both answers be marked as correct ?? What do you think ??
by jesus
Thu Jun 25, 2015 2:54 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Listening multiple choice question.
Replies: 9
Views: 3457

Re: Listening multiple choice question.

I will be having my LRW exams tomorrow. I am really confused about the band calculation in listening. Someone told me that the band score calculation is different for academic and general. I am doing general. plz help me how much score i need to get for general ielts listening for the band 7.5. I l...
by jesus
Thu Jun 25, 2015 2:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!
Replies: 4
Views: 1052

Re: GT, essays 7-8. Band score 7+ needed!

Hello, Gelever brother !! Well, you have strong vocabulary and essay is well structured. I think its a good band essay. However, i think i would alter somethings here in your first essay. In this essay, the advantages to both approaches will be discussed in the following order before drawing a reaso...