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by kiaconchim
Tue Mar 10, 2015 5:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please help me assess
Replies: 4
Views: 1308

Re: Writing task 2. Please help me assess

As it should be, cuz it's a model answer. My question here is, the way he supports his ideas is just like the answer for "discuss both view and your opinion" type of question, when this question is "to what extent do you agree or disagree?". I thought for this type of question, w...
by kiaconchim
Tue Mar 03, 2015 10:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 3
Views: 2646

Re: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

Yes. And I don't understand what you mean? Do you mean the vocab is still simple?
by kiaconchim
Mon Mar 02, 2015 6:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 3
Views: 2646

Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private informa...
by kiaconchim
Fri Feb 27, 2015 12:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please help me assess
Replies: 4
Views: 1308

Writing task 2. Please help me assess

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Some people believe that we should not help people in the other countries as long as there are problems in our ow...
by kiaconchim
Thu Feb 26, 2015 6:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 0
Views: 491

Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits? There is an argument about whether the ad...
by kiaconchim
Wed Feb 25, 2015 10:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 2
Views: 861

Re: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

I thought this was very good - I usually recommend my students to start sentences with advanced words, instead of words like "The..." - http://www.onlineenglishteacher.org/en/study-topics/ielts/ielts-advice/ielts-writing-advice/advanced-vocabulary-for-starting-ielts-writing-sentences . Ex...
by kiaconchim
Wed Feb 25, 2015 10:53 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 Graph line
Replies: 2
Views: 1444

Re: Task 1 Graph line

Thanks a lot Flick :)
by kiaconchim
Wed Feb 25, 2015 7:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 2
Views: 861

Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? The environment has been heavily impacted by humans’ activities, but it is not too late for us to take steps to reduce those damages that we are c...
by kiaconchim
Tue Feb 24, 2015 5:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 1
Views: 1091

Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think? With the rapid development of science and technology, television, an innovation of the 20th century, is becoming more popular in modern societies. Due to that...
by kiaconchim
Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:54 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Children Given Lot of Homework - 29 Jan 2015
Replies: 3
Views: 4334

Re: Children Given Lot of Homework - 29 Jan 2015

In many countries, children are given a lot of homework. Some people feel that if children are given less homework, then they will face less stress and can also develop extra skills. What is your opinion about this? Students are the future of every country. Some say that pupils should be given a lo...
by kiaconchim
Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:54 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Children Given Lot of Homework - 29 Jan 2015
Replies: 3
Views: 4334

Re: Children Given Lot of Homework - 29 Jan 2015

In many countries, children are given a lot of homework. Some people feel that if children are given less homework, then they will face less stress and can also develop extra skills. What is your opinion about this? Students are the future of every country. Some say that pupils should be given a lo...
by kiaconchim
Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2..my first time here!
Replies: 3
Views: 1043

Re: Please assess my writing task 2..my first time here!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my essay... So you mean I should put may be to positive and two negative points ?? HOW MUCH YOU THINK I WOULD SCORE !! :D :D :D You're welcome :) What I meant back there was if you used plural words in the introduction, you should give out more than one id...
by kiaconchim
Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing task 2..my first time here!
Replies: 3
Views: 1043

Re: Please assess my writing task 2..my first time here!

The topic was : More people are going to universities these days than in the past, they start to work later in life but with higher qualifications. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ? MY ESSAY: Education has become a key requirement for almost all jobs, hence the majority of...
by kiaconchim
Mon Feb 23, 2015 8:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 0
Views: 324

Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? It is true that how people communicate with each other has been revolutionize...
by kiaconchim
Thu Feb 19, 2015 2:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 Graph line
Replies: 2
Views: 1444

Task 1 Graph line

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words. http://s29.postimg.org/te449qpiv/...
by kiaconchim
Mon Dec 29, 2014 12:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Graph line Task 1 - Please evaluate this writing for me :)
Replies: 3
Views: 1165

Re: Graph line Task 1 - Please evaluate this writing for me

The line graph above represents the changes of the percentage of Internet usage by the population in the USA, Canada, and Mexico from 1999 to 2009. It can be seen that the proportion of people who used the Internet increased sharply in all countries throughout the period. Overall , the U SA and Can...
by kiaconchim
Wed Dec 17, 2014 12:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay try-outs
Replies: 14
Views: 4628

Re: An band score 8 essay?

I have no experience in marking an essay, so I wouldn't be able to say what range it would fall in, but I know about grammars and vocabulary, and I find this sooooo good! Wish I could right this good when my exam comes. In my opinion, I find the structure and the complex of grammars used are great, ...
by kiaconchim
Tue Dec 16, 2014 9:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Graph line Task 1 - Please evaluate this writing for me :)
Replies: 3
Views: 1165

Graph line Task 1 - Please evaluate this writing for me :)

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb130/trungha92/graph.jpg The line graph above represents the changes of the percentage of Internet usage by the population in the USA, Canada, and Mexico from 1999 to 2009. It can be seen that the proportion of people who used Internet increased sharply in all co...