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by wzncx
Tue Jul 07, 2015 9:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need a proofreading, great thanks
Replies: 2
Views: 814

Re: Need a proofreading, great thanks

Hi there, The essay advances your thoughts quite well. Aside from a few minor grammatical/spelling errors, the key thing a few things for you to consider is to increase the variability of how you begin a sentence. Most of your sentences begin with connectors like "Admittedly, ...", "...
by wzncx
Thu Jul 02, 2015 6:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need a proofreading, great thanks
Replies: 2
Views: 814

Need a proofreading, great thanks

Could anyone proofread this essay for me please, great appreciate :D Nowadays, more and more people use credit cards. It seems that cash and coins will be replaced by credit cards in future. Is this a positive or negative trend? These days, the popularity of credit card uses is increasing, thus many...
by wzncx
Fri May 08, 2015 4:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please
Replies: 7
Views: 3107

Re: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please

I think you are absolutely right Dr.Matthew, :| I spent 90% of my focus on task 2, as I thought task1 would be relatively easy. That`s why I always made some mistakes in task1. For example, in the last IELTS test I took, I made a quite serious error in the task1. Unsurprisingly, I got a score of 6.5...
by wzncx
Thu May 07, 2015 3:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please
Replies: 7
Views: 3107

Re: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please

Thank you very much for your correction Dr.Matthew, it`s really helpful. Actually, I spent more than 40 mins to finish this essay,and I had corrected it before I posted it on the forum. So I don`t think I can write an essay like this under an exam condition, which might be the reason why my writing ...
by wzncx
Tue May 05, 2015 3:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please
Replies: 7
Views: 3107

IELTS writing task2 need a proofreading please

could someone please proofread my essay, greatly appreciated :D Traffic jam is a serious problem of big cities. Governments decide to build wider roads in order to solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree? Some governments widen roads in large cities as a way of addressing traffic congestion. Per...
by wzncx
Fri Dec 12, 2014 8:44 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: IELTS Academic exam on 13TH DECEMBER
Replies: 61
Views: 27052

Re: IELTS Academic exam on 13TH DECEMBER

I took the speaking test today in Hangzhou China P1 name and occupation place you live do you think the place you live suits having families what`s your favorite weather if you live in extremely hot or cold place which one you would like p2 a piece of advice in what situation who gives to you what w...
by wzncx
Sun Dec 07, 2014 3:46 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: IELTS Academic exam on 13TH DECEMBER
Replies: 61
Views: 27052

Re: IELTS Academic exam on 13TH DECEMBER

HI guys my name is XIao from China. I guess we are all on the same page here, wish best luck for all of us on the test day. My email: wzncx8879@yahoo.com.au