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by ashok4ielts
Thu Nov 13, 2014 10:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protectin
Replies: 6
Views: 12692

Re: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so prote

Thanks !! I appreciate your remaks and sure I'll try to take care.
by ashok4ielts
Thu Nov 13, 2014 9:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay and provide me a feedback....!!!
Replies: 6
Views: 4044

Re: Please evaluate my essay and provide me a feedback....!!

I'm not an expert and I'm also going to appear in ielts exam. Here are few remarks You have very good command on vocabulary and experssed many ideas. Overall its very good. It seems difficult to achieve in 40 mins in IELTS, need to reduces the size. ----- I've also tried to to experess my views on t...
by ashok4ielts
Mon Nov 10, 2014 11:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay for improvment. Please provide your feedback.
Replies: 1
Views: 1755

Essay for improvment. Please provide your feedback.

Topic International travel is cheaper than ever before, and more countries have opened their doors to tourists. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? Stratgy Scope : International travel (foreign visitors, travel abroad), cheap travel (inexpensive, less costly affair) Discussi...
by ashok4ielts
Mon Nov 10, 2014 11:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protectin
Replies: 6
Views: 12692

Re: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so prote

Thanks a lot Axiom. This is very helpful for me.
by ashok4ielts
Fri Nov 07, 2014 3:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protectin
Replies: 6
Views: 12692

Re: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so prote

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
by ashok4ielts
Fri Nov 07, 2014 3:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protectin
Replies: 6
Views: 12692

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protectin

Strategy ----------------------- Argument essay Scope - Wild animals, risk to natural habitats, protect wildlife, Disagree 1. Importance of wildlife to maintain natural balance 2. Benefit of creating resource to protect wildlife ----------------------- These days the wild life is at greater risk of ...