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by tulusin1922
Sat Nov 01, 2014 3:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: ¿Can someone check my essay please?
Replies: 0
Views: 508

¿Can someone check my essay please?

MOST SCHOOLS OFFER SOME TYPE OF PHYSICAL EDUCATION PROGRAM TO THEIR STUDENTS. WHY IS PHYSICAL EDUCATION IMPORTANT? SHOULD PHYSICAL EDUCATION CLASSES BE REQUIRED OR OPTIONAL? Since most schools started to include physical education programs in their curriculae many questions have arisen. Why has exer...
by tulusin1922
Fri Oct 31, 2014 9:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: discusse both views and give your opinion
Replies: 2
Views: 859

Re: discusse both views and give your opinion

You must give your opinion on the introduction and then in the body of the essay justify it with reasons. Finally, you conclude with a restatement of your opinion and, ideally, you should also provide a solution to the problem.
by tulusin1922
Fri Oct 31, 2014 7:38 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Need a Study Partner - Sydney
Replies: 17
Views: 4787

Re: Need a Study Partner - Sydney

Hi guys, I'm taking my IELTS next week and I'm aiming for a 7.5 at each band. Honestly my writing is quite bad and with the speaking part I also have some issues. I didn't had much time to prepare so now I'm looking for a study partner, specially for the speaking part. ¿Which test are you taking, ac...
by tulusin1922
Fri Oct 31, 2014 7:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please correct my essay. I also have a few questions aswell
Replies: 2
Views: 805

Re: Please correct my essay. I also have a few questions asw

I noticed that your actually don't answer the question, instead you just throw some facts on what people usually think it means being a celebrity. On the first paragraph you give a definition of celebrity that is completely unnecessary, instead you should write a brief introduction stating your opin...
by tulusin1922
Thu Oct 30, 2014 10:49 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Looking for a speaking/writing partner. Aiming band 7
Replies: 0
Views: 527

Looking for a speaking/writing partner. Aiming band 7

Hi everyone,

I'm Nara, from Mexico, I'm planning to take the IELTS in November 8th, the academic one and I'm having BIG issues with the writing and speaking sections.
Anyone interested in practicing? My Skype user is tulusin1922. Whatsapp +527223103931

Greetings!
by tulusin1922
Thu Oct 30, 2014 10:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic Writing Tsk 1, ¿Please comment? I need a band 7
Replies: 0
Views: 1445

Academic Writing Tsk 1, ¿Please comment? I need a band 7

Hi guys, I'm taking the IELTS (Academic) next week and I'm struggling with the writing section. I've been practicing but since I don't have a tutor I don't know if I'm doing it right. It's supposed to be a description of two pie charts but I can't copy the charts, so I just pasted the text below. Fe...
by tulusin1922
Thu Oct 30, 2014 10:06 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS TEST IN 2 DAYS!! Just an opinion PLEASE!
Replies: 4
Views: 3775

Re: IELTS TEST IN 2 DAYS!! Just an opinion PLEASE!

Hi! Overall, the main idea of your essay is understandable. However, your essay lacks consistency and coherence, also there are many spelling mistakes. These are some suggestions, compare both your original essay with this, the main idea remains but the words are different. This is quite important i...