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by will.nguyen
Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls rate this IELTS Task2 Essay-Aiming 8
Replies: 3
Views: 1031

Re: Pls rate this IELTS Task2 Essay-Aiming 8

Wow, your essay is very good. Good vocabulary. Good grammar structure (although there are some minor grammatical mistakes), and you have nail the question. However, some of your sentences are way too long, you should put a comma or break it down a little bit. For example: "I have traveled all t...
by will.nguyen
Mon Nov 17, 2014 8:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: [Task 2] Machine translation. Is this writing a band 7?
Replies: 2
Views: 1301

Re: [Task 2] Machine translation. Is this writing a band 7?

The comments below are purely my opinions. (I only score 6.5 for IELTS writing) I believe your first body paragraph is very confusing. First you said that MT is fast, then you argue against it, and finally you conclude that MT is still a good thing. I am not sure about that. I believe the last part...
by will.nguyen
Mon Nov 17, 2014 8:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please help me to evaluate my essay, which score band ?
Replies: 2
Views: 715

Re: please help me to evaluate my essay, which score band ?

Even though globalization affects the world in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten, Discuss You should write at least 250 words No doubt that the globalization is extremely important for societies. Especially, in developing countries that need to exchange cultures with ot...
by will.nguyen
Mon Nov 17, 2014 8:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2-A (18/10/2014 IELTS - Asia Pacific)
Replies: 10
Views: 6491

Re: Writing task 2-A (18/10/2014 IELTS - Asia Pacific)

Shreyas wrote:impressive essay! you have included some nice examples and points in your supporting paragraph . . but what about the word count?
The word count is roughly around 250 words.. . And yet I continued to score 6.5 in all of latest attempt (in October). Thank you for your kind comments :D
by will.nguyen
Mon Nov 17, 2014 8:27 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Hello everyone,
Replies: 2
Views: 764

Re: Hello everyone,

Sorry, I haven't gotten used to this website, so I just saw your reply a couple of minutes ago. .
by will.nguyen
Fri Oct 24, 2014 7:35 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Hello everyone,
Replies: 2
Views: 764

Hello everyone,

I am the new member here. I have taken the IELTS test more than 5 times, not counting the one I will take this Saturday. My writing is currently stuck at 6.5. I have no idea how to improve it. If anyone has an idea, please comment below. I sincerely look forward to see your constructive comments. Th...
by will.nguyen
Tue Oct 21, 2014 2:45 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: People appearing for 25th OCT (IELTS)
Replies: 27
Views: 11514

Re: People appearing for 25th OCT (IELTS)

Hi,

I am preparing for IELTS test on Oct 25 too (Vietnam).
by will.nguyen
Mon Oct 20, 2014 8:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2-A (18/10/2014 IELTS - Asia Pacific)
Replies: 10
Views: 6491

Writing task 2-A (18/10/2014 IELTS - Asia Pacific)

" Topic : Some people say it is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about their cultures. We can learn just as much from books, films or internet. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Today, the world is witnessing the increasing amount of people travel to another place and lea...