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Thank you so much for your quick and thorough remarks. I will try my best to improve my pronunciation at the second time.

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I aim for band 7, so please help me assess whether my essay is worth to get it.

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Topic 6: Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions. [/b] The advent of new means of transportation such as hi...

The topic is "Describe an outdoor activity that you want to do", a task 2 topic.

Attached below is my recording.

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Oh I see. Thank you, Khalidsutani.

Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Women are not regarded as appropriate candidates to be soldiers in any section of an army. However, many people advocate women joining armies without sex co...

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Thank Khalidsultani for your comments. I will try to improve my grammar.

I just wonder why the last paragraph is not a conclusion? I summarized my argument and made a recommendation in that one.

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Topic 74: Currently more and more people respect elders and become convinced that older people should live with their families which is in contrast to the view that older people should live at a nursing home. What is your opinion? In eastern countries, elders usually live with their own families, w...

Topic 16: Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? For a long time, big cities have always attracted a large number of people to come thanks to occupational and educational opportunities. Because of this, the issue of housing shortag...