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by rakez
Sat Nov 08, 2014 7:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: people are getting married & having kids in their thirties
Replies: 2
Views: 950

Re: people are getting married & having kids in their thirti

Hello Mr.Flick and everyone. i have posted a new essay on Marriage and having kids on their thirties.Please comment on my essay
and give band score for my further improvement on writing task2.Thank you.
Rakez,hyderbad,India
by rakez
Sat Nov 08, 2014 7:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: people are getting married & having kids in their thirties
Replies: 2
Views: 950

people are getting married & having kids in their thirties

Now a days people are getting married and having children in their thirties.Does it have a positive or a negative impact on the society ?give your opinion and examples. ANSWER:It is undeniable fact that ,the age of marriage and their childs birth is delayed upto the last thirties .Especially this tr...
by rakez
Mon Nov 03, 2014 3:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
Replies: 3
Views: 2334

Re: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use

Hi Mr.Flick and everyone, thank you for comments and correcting my previous essay.I posted a new essay, focus on brands and products.Give your feedback and please give a band score to my essay.Thank you in advance.
by rakez
Mon Nov 03, 2014 3:43 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
Replies: 3
Views: 2334

Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use

topic: Some people focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use. Do you think this behavior has more advantages than disadvantages. It is always a debatable issue whether to purchase the branded products and impact on the public.In the recent years the branded companies goods has a signif...
by rakez
Sun Nov 02, 2014 7:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can any one please, give feeback on my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 584

Re: Can any one please, give feeback on my essay

Hi Mr.Ryan,Flick and everyone.I am Rakez from hyderabad, India. I have exam in two weeks.Please comment and provide your feeback on my essay.Thank you
by rakez
Sun Nov 02, 2014 7:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can any one please, give feeback on my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 584

Can any one please, give feeback on my essay

Question:Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime.Do you agree or disagree. Answer:In the modern days, it is quite a common fact that people change their job frequently.Because of the rise of employme...
by rakez
Fri Oct 31, 2014 2:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime
Replies: 1
Views: 3723

Re: A person should change a career at least once for a life

Hi everyone, please comment on my essay.I require 7 band score.Please comment on mistakes and provide your feedback.What can be the bandscore for this essay?
by rakez
Fri Oct 31, 2014 2:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime
Replies: 1
Views: 3723

A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime

Question:Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime.Do you agree or disagree. Answer:In the modern days, it is quite a common fact that people change their job frequently.Because of the rise of employme...
by rakez
Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: children should teach by teacher while others believe that c
Replies: 5
Views: 1996

Re: children should teach by teacher while others believe th

Thank you khulan. i will rewrite the essay and try to correct my mistakes.What can be the approximate band score, please mention.
by rakez
Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: children should teach by teacher while others believe that c
Replies: 5
Views: 1996

children should teach by teacher while others believe that c

Hi Mr.Ryan and everyone, i require a band score 7.Please comment on my writing task 2 and provide the feedback for the below essay. Topic: Some people believe that children should teach by teacher while others believe that computer and internet is best way for children to teach? Do you agree? Answer...
by rakez
Sat Oct 18, 2014 10:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Learning a different foreign language before English is, in
Replies: 2
Views: 1740

Re: Learning a different foreign language before English is,

Hello, please comment on my essay and share feedback, so that i can focus in my neagtive aspects and help how can i improve my writings.
by rakez
Sat Oct 18, 2014 6:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Learning a different foreign language before English is, in
Replies: 2
Views: 1740

Learning a different foreign language before English is, in

Topic: It is very clear now that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different foreign language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Answer: There is no deny that English is t...