Hello Mr.Flick and everyone. i have posted a new essay on Marriage and having kids on their thirties.Please comment on my essay
and give band score for my further improvement on writing task2.Thank you.
Rakez,hyderbad,India
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- Sat Nov 08, 2014 7:18 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: people are getting married & having kids in their thirties
- Replies: 2
- Views: 950
- Sat Nov 08, 2014 7:16 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: people are getting married & having kids in their thirties
- Replies: 2
- Views: 950
people are getting married & having kids in their thirties
Now a days people are getting married and having children in their thirties.Does it have a positive or a negative impact on the society ?give your opinion and examples. ANSWER:It is undeniable fact that ,the age of marriage and their childs birth is delayed upto the last thirties .Especially this tr...
- Mon Nov 03, 2014 3:51 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2334
Re: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
Hi Mr.Flick and everyone, thank you for comments and correcting my previous essay.I posted a new essay, focus on brands and products.Give your feedback and please give a band score to my essay.Thank you in advance.
- Mon Nov 03, 2014 3:43 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2334
Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
topic: Some people focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use. Do you think this behavior has more advantages than disadvantages. It is always a debatable issue whether to purchase the branded products and impact on the public.In the recent years the branded companies goods has a signif...
- Sun Nov 02, 2014 7:25 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Can any one please, give feeback on my essay
- Replies: 1
- Views: 584
Re: Can any one please, give feeback on my essay
Hi Mr.Ryan,Flick and everyone.I am Rakez from hyderabad, India. I have exam in two weeks.Please comment and provide your feeback on my essay.Thank you
- Sun Nov 02, 2014 7:12 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Can any one please, give feeback on my essay
- Replies: 1
- Views: 584
Can any one please, give feeback on my essay
Question:Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime.Do you agree or disagree. Answer:In the modern days, it is quite a common fact that people change their job frequently.Because of the rise of employme...
- Fri Oct 31, 2014 2:45 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3723
Re: A person should change a career at least once for a life
Hi everyone, please comment on my essay.I require 7 band score.Please comment on mistakes and provide your feedback.What can be the bandscore for this essay?
- Fri Oct 31, 2014 2:38 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3723
A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime
Question:Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime.Do you agree or disagree. Answer:In the modern days, it is quite a common fact that people change their job frequently.Because of the rise of employme...
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:07 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: children should teach by teacher while others believe that c
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1996
Re: children should teach by teacher while others believe th
Thank you khulan. i will rewrite the essay and try to correct my mistakes.What can be the approximate band score, please mention.
- Thu Oct 23, 2014 12:15 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: children should teach by teacher while others believe that c
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1996
children should teach by teacher while others believe that c
Hi Mr.Ryan and everyone, i require a band score 7.Please comment on my writing task 2 and provide the feedback for the below essay. Topic: Some people believe that children should teach by teacher while others believe that computer and internet is best way for children to teach? Do you agree? Answer...
- Sat Oct 18, 2014 10:46 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Learning a different foreign language before English is, in
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1740
Re: Learning a different foreign language before English is,
Hello, please comment on my essay and share feedback, so that i can focus in my neagtive aspects and help how can i improve my writings.
- Sat Oct 18, 2014 6:19 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Learning a different foreign language before English is, in
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1740
Learning a different foreign language before English is, in
Topic: It is very clear now that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different foreign language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Answer: There is no deny that English is t...