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- Fri Sep 19, 2014 8:38 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Parents VS Friends, influences.
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Re: Parents VS Friends, influences.
Buddy this is an argument topic not a discussion topic.So, you should have write your thesis(what you are trying to prove agree or disagree) in the introduction para rather than saying "we'll analyze both".
- Fri Sep 19, 2014 8:26 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: IELTS 8 , TEST 1, WRITING TASK 2
- Replies: 5
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Re: IELTS 8 , TEST 1, WRITING TASK 2
Sorry to say Nanna but, your essay is not up to the marks. Here are your some Editing you can do- 1.Use 2 POV(Point of view) in ur intro para 2.Never ever reveal/tell your opinion/thoughts in Intro para. Do it in conclusion para(the last para) 3.Use examples in your each supporting para's that suppo...