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Hi Kumar If you allow me this correction, you must avoid using words such as "I strongly feel...or " It's up to the parents... Try and use " It is believed..."..and "As has been proven..." Keep it formal and back it with facts and data. Great essay though, better then m...

Thx Kumar, I think you're right. I'll rewrite the essay in a couple of days. Good feed back, ty.

Hello, My name is Iulia, I am originally from Romania, currently living in NZ and I am trying to pass my IELTS exam. Please rate my essay. Full time university students spend most of time studying. They should be doing other activities too. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In today's world, ...