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by herreradavid1
Sat Mar 01, 2014 11:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please point out errors on my essay and grade it
Replies: 0
Views: 588

Please point out errors on my essay and grade it

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discus both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from you...
by herreradavid1
Sat Mar 01, 2014 4:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please grade. I need band 7. :)
Replies: 1
Views: 2409

Re: Please grade. I need band 7. :)

The most vital use of trees among many others is the production of oxygen , which is important for human survival. This is because they produce oxygen through the process of photosynthesis. However, deforestation is becoming rampant worldwide. Trees are being cut down for their use in timber and ot...
by herreradavid1
Sat Mar 01, 2014 3:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please chk my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 916

Re: please chk my writing task 2

Some people emphasize on the freedom of the children and consider liberation the absolute right of anyone even at early childhood. Whereas certain masses defy the concept of freedom to children and recommend being strict to it. People having these two different opinions state their own favorable log...
by herreradavid1
Sat Mar 01, 2014 2:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my essay (Academic writing)
Replies: 2
Views: 2804

Re: please grade my essay (Academic writing)

Hi sertonima. Please find below my corrections 1) people have started following passed rules and being responsible for the actions they accomplished I would say: and taking responsibility for for the crimes they committed. (or for the actions the did) 2) this issue and suggest my own opinion. I thin...
by herreradavid1
Fri Oct 25, 2013 11:47 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Looking for a practice partner for speaking and writing
Replies: 13
Views: 5907

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