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19. You are working for a company. You need to take some time off from work and want to ask your manager about this. In your letter, 1. Explain why you want to take time off work 2. Give details of the time you need 3. Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away. Response: Dear Denay,...

16. Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefit or more problems? Response: Since a long time, many people want to be like most famous personalities, but this isn’t as easy as it ...

26. You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days after purchase it has stopped working. You spoke to the company representative a week ago. But the phone has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, 1. Introduce yourself 2. Explain the situation 3. Say what ac...

Question 28. Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or a negative development? Response: A couple of decades ago, people used traditional methods...

25. You rented a car from a car rental company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to your company. In your letter, 1. Introduce yourself 2. Explain the situation 3. Say what action you would like them to tak...

Question 27: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion. Response: Educating young children about moral values and righteous deeds is very ...

The essay is neat, and contains logical flow of information. However some linking phrases could be used to connect sentences or ideas.

18. You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter 1. Explain why you are writing 2. Explain why you have decided to leave the company 3. Tell your employer what you have planned to do after leaving the job. Response: To the Human Resources Depart...

20. Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. - Why do so many people want to study in English? - Why is English such an important English language - Give reasons for your answers. Resp...

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4. You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor, in your letter - Describe the situation - Explain why you cannot continue at this time - Say what action you would like to take. Dear Sir,...

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. * News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. - What factors do you think influence these decisions? - Do we become used to bad news? - Would it be ...

7. Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends, In the letter - Thank them for the photos and holiday - Explain why you didn't write earlier - Invite them to come and stay with you. Dea...

Essay Question 2: As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. • What factors contribute to job satisfaction? • How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? • Give reasons for your answer a...

Letter Writing 7 . Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends, In the letter - Thank them for the photos and holiday - Explain why you didn't write earlier - Invite them to come and st...

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Letter Writing 2: You are planning to join a part-time course and have come to know about an organization that can sponsor your studies. Write a letter to the head of the organization mentioning – - Your educational background - How the organization can help you do this course - What is the benefit...

Letter Writing 2: You are planning to join a part-time course and have come to know about an organization that can sponsor your studies. Write a letter to the head of the organization mentioning – - Your educational background - How the organization can help you do this course - What is the benefit...

Essay Question 6: Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. • Which do you consider to be the major influence? • Give reasons for your answer and including any relevant examp...

Your logical support of ideas are good. However you write very long sentences, it is good to write concise sentences most of the times. You have followed good essay structure:)

My Feedback: Overall, the flow of information is good. Cohesion devices is handled well. Sentences are structured in a concise manner and good vocabulary too. However some mistakes are present which are pointed in 'red' below. Environmental protection is a topic which is more pronounced by today’s m...

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Question 2: You are planning to join a part-time course and have come to know about an organization that can sponsor your studies. Write a letter to the head of the organization mentioning – - Your educational background - How the organization can help you do this course - What is the benefit of do...

Question 1: 1. Write a letter about complaining the problems faced by you due to a recent airport construction work started in your area. In your letter i. Describe the situation ii. Explain why you are upset about it iii. Suggest a solution Response: To whom it may concern, My name is Fazil Hassan...

Essay Question: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any ...