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Hello Delvy I have read ur writing and understand that you have an ability in it.but i there're some sentences unclear to understand.for ex. The poor countries are suffering for water.And i changed it in this way. Poor countries are suffering from lack of fresh water.

hello Sulaiman,i read ur writing.you have complex grammar and vocabulary,it is so nice.ideas should be organized accurately.i mean cohesion is ur problem. But i believe that u can easily write band 8 or 9 if you can write well organized.Good luck.