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by ms5
Thu Jul 10, 2014 7:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay
Replies: 10
Views: 8021

Re: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay

No, you are not right. For example, look at Ryan's example of discussion essay : http://ieltsielts.com/model-essay-sample-discussion-essay-response/ The question here states two different points of view, and you should DISCUSS both. In argument essay there is one question (like in our topic). You sh...
by ms5
Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay
Replies: 10
Views: 8021

Re: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay

Why do you think it is a discussion essay? As for me, it is completely argument essay. There is one question that requires our own opinion (discussion essay states usually two general opinions which are required to be discussed, and at the end of the essay we have to choose which one we prefer). The...
by ms5
Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay
Replies: 10
Views: 8021

Re: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay

Here is my version of this essay. Please, give your opinion. In most of the countries all over the world there is a noticeable tendency for high posts in companies to be occupied by men. A possible reason for this fact is sex discrimination. One of the methods to fight it is to retain some amount of...
by ms5
Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay
Replies: 10
Views: 8021

Re: Task 2 attempt. Discussion Essay

Hi! Here is my modest comment: - It is too long for writing task 2 (it is better to use less than 300 words) Look at the durai’s answer according to the size of the writing task 2 here: http://ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=2206 - About the structure: You know, I usually use different stru...
by ms5
Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 Education
Replies: 2
Views: 672

Re: Writing task 2 Education

Thanks a lot for the good comment. I really appreciate it. :)
by ms5
Tue Jul 08, 2014 8:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 Education
Replies: 2
Views: 672

Writing task 2 Education

Hi everybody! Please, give your comment. (Aim - band 7) Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay. Different people prefer different methods ...