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Thank you for your advice. U r right, i should't use however there. I probably should just mention the opposed opinion at the beginning of last paragraph and restate my opinion. What do you think? what band do you think i can get? Thank you!!!!!

Could anyone tell me what band this essay can get ? And pls correct the mistakes if possible. I really appreciate you help. Several languages are dying out every year. Some people do not think it is important and say that our life will be simpler with fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or ...