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by goldcoastielts
Wed Jun 12, 2024 3:16 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: IELTS writing task 2 - PARTS OF AN ESSAY
Replies: 0
Views: 286

IELTS writing task 2 - PARTS OF AN ESSAY

In this video, learn how to use background statements, thesis statements, topic sentences, supporting sentences, and conclusions to write awesome IELTS task 2 body paragraphs.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QkgwaY4w0e8&t=17s

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by goldcoastielts
Sun May 30, 2021 2:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my writing task 1 and provide feedback
Replies: 1
Views: 7020

Re: Please rate my writing task 1 and provide feedback

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by goldcoastielts
Sun May 16, 2021 6:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I'm new here, i will seat for my IELTS exam in next month. Please suggest improvements needed to score 7 or 7+ writing
Replies: 1
Views: 6998

Re: I'm new here, i will seat for my IELTS exam in next month. Please suggest improvements needed to score 7 or 7+ writi

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by goldcoastielts
Sat May 15, 2021 2:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writting task 2, please help to check.
Replies: 2
Views: 7557

Re: IELTS writting task 2, please help to check.

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by goldcoastielts
Mon May 03, 2021 7:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS TASK 1 please check and provide feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 7279

Re: IELTS TASK 1 please check and provide feedback

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by goldcoastielts
Sat May 01, 2021 1:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Writing Task2..Please asses
Replies: 1
Views: 7081

Re: General Writing Task2..Please asses

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by goldcoastielts
Sat May 01, 2021 1:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 8507

Re: Writing Task 2 please evaluate

Hi habibka, Basically both these sentences have a lot of verbs inside them which makes it a bit hard to follow the flow of each sentence. For example you could rewrite the first one in the following way: ORIGINAL: Children should learn to love and respect each other and not judge their friends based...
by goldcoastielts
Sun Apr 25, 2021 4:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 8507

Re: Writing Task 2 please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Apr 25, 2021 3:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.
Replies: 3
Views: 7898

Re: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.

Thanks Mohammad. :ugeek:
by goldcoastielts
Sat Apr 24, 2021 12:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical p
Replies: 1
Views: 7127

Re: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practic

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Apr 24, 2021 12:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.
Replies: 3
Views: 7898

Re: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Apr 24, 2021 12:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .
Replies: 3
Views: 7912

Re: Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .

Thank you!
Glad it could help you on your IELTS journey...
by goldcoastielts
Sat Apr 17, 2021 11:43 pm
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "IELTS task 2 sentence pairs"
Replies: 0
Views: 26256

YouTube : "IELTS task 2 sentence pairs"

Hey guys!

https://youtu.be/1P2Wo6Y65bA

So in this video I will shou you how to write sentence pairs in IELTS body paragraphs. Sentence pairs help you write extended pieces of meaning and are great for your Task Achievement score in IELTS task 2.

https://youtu.be/1P2Wo6Y65bA
by goldcoastielts
Sat Apr 17, 2021 11:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .
Replies: 3
Views: 7912

Re: Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Apr 10, 2021 1:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate Writing Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 7534

Re: Please evaluate Writing Task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Tue Apr 06, 2021 5:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 8370

Re: Please evaluate my writing task 2

Yes no problem. Good luck for the test..
by goldcoastielts
Mon Apr 05, 2021 1:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 8370

Re: Please evaluate my writing task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Mon Apr 05, 2021 12:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing task 1
Replies: 3
Views: 7837

Re: Please evaluate my writing task 1

Because you are so polite I will do it. Good luck! :D
by goldcoastielts
Sun Apr 04, 2021 12:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing task 1
Replies: 3
Views: 7837

Re: Please evaluate my writing task 1

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Mar 27, 2021 1:09 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "Present simple vs. Present continuous"
Replies: 0
Views: 25555

YouTube : "Present simple vs. Present continuous"

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https://youtu.be/OqsuIHD93Cc

In this video I will show you the difference between the present simple and the present continuous.

Check it out!

https://youtu.be/OqsuIHD93Cc

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Mar 26, 2021 12:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate Writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 7361

Re: Please evaluate Writing task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Mon Mar 15, 2021 6:01 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "Present perfect simple and past simple"
Replies: 0
Views: 25299

YouTube : "Present perfect simple and past simple"

How's it going!

https://youtu.be/BhFPg6JfgNY

In this video I will teach you the difference between the present perfect simple, and past simple verbs. I'll also show you how to use these two verbs in an IELTS task 1 bar chart. Check it out!

https://youtu.be/BhFPg6JfgNY
by goldcoastielts
Thu Mar 11, 2021 11:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic Writing Task 1 Please kindly evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 7486

Re: Academic Writing Task 1 Please kindly evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Mar 04, 2021 12:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Evaluate Writing Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 7396

Re: Please Evaluate Writing Task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Mar 04, 2021 12:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Evaluate Writing Task1
Replies: 1
Views: 7146

Re: Please Evaluate Writing Task1

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