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by goldcoastielts
Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 1
Views: 8039

Re: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Nov 15, 2020 6:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 9516

Re: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help

Hi Twinkle,
Yes if you want to get 7.0 in the task 1 you need to make a few little changes to the way you write it.
But if you just do those simple things I described in the advice section, that could be enough to get you there!

Keep on going!! :ugeek:
by goldcoastielts
Fri Nov 13, 2020 1:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 9516

Re: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Nov 12, 2020 2:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 7988

Re: Writing task 2 please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:01 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "IELTS task 1 man-made and natural process essays"
Replies: 0
Views: 26392

YouTube : "IELTS task 1 man-made and natural process essays"

Hey how's it going! :ugeek:

https://youtu.be/mQp56JiJcAc

In this video I will show you the 3 ways to write AWESOME IELTS task 1 man-made and natural process essays.

1. Use sequence connectors
2. Use relative clauses
3. Use PASSIVE VOICE and SIMPLE PRESENT verbs.

https://youtu.be/mQp56JiJcAc
by goldcoastielts
Wed Nov 11, 2020 4:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review
Replies: 3
Views: 8639

Re: Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review

OH I see.
Thanks!
by goldcoastielts
Tue Nov 10, 2020 12:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review
Replies: 3
Views: 8639

Re: Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Nov 08, 2020 6:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 2
Views: 8385

Re: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Nov 06, 2020 11:01 pm
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "Using could and would in problem solution essays"
Replies: 0
Views: 26140

YouTube : "Using could and would in problem solution essays"

Hi there!

https://youtu.be/VI3Qt9q3VsU

Did you know that there is some special language that you should be using to write problem-solution task 2 essays? That's right! You can use modals to talk about solutions and problems.

Check it out! :ugeek:

https://youtu.be/VI3Qt9q3VsU

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Nov 06, 2020 8:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow customs and behavior.
Replies: 1
Views: 11263

Re: Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow customs and behavior.

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Nov 05, 2020 7:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs.
Replies: 1
Views: 11431

Re: Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs.

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Nov 04, 2020 12:02 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "Understanding IELTS Task 2 Questions"
Replies: 0
Views: 26581

YouTube : "Understanding IELTS Task 2 Questions"

Hi there! https://youtu.be/MJVgSlOCLZ8 It can be really daunting to open up an IELTS test booklet and see a task 2 question staring back at you. A lot of my students have trouble just understanding the question. So in this video, I will explain the easiest way to analyse and understand IELTS task 2 ...
by goldcoastielts
Tue Nov 03, 2020 4:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 8380

Re: Writing task 2 please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Oct 30, 2020 11:47 pm
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "IELTS Task 2 linking language"
Replies: 0
Views: 26476

YouTube : "IELTS Task 2 linking language"

Hi there! Are you having trouble with your task 2 linking language?? https://youtu.be/slnYl_2WXjw There is one really easy way to get points for IELTS task 2. Add some interesting linking language for the cohesion and coherence score! A lot of people write great grammar and vocabulary, but miss out ...
by goldcoastielts
Fri Oct 30, 2020 11:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 crime shows: Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 9972

Re: Task 2 crime shows: Please help

Yes it is hard.

Please check out the YouTube link I attached above for task 2 linking language help.. :ugeek:
by goldcoastielts
Fri Oct 30, 2020 1:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 crime shows: Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 9972

Re: Task 2 crime shows: Please help

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Oct 29, 2020 6:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.
Replies: 1
Views: 8039

Re: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 28, 2020 6:18 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "IELTS Task 1 FULL DEMONSTRATION"
Replies: 0
Views: 26518

YouTube : "IELTS Task 1 FULL DEMONSTRATION"

Hi ! ;) https://youtu.be/AMLNafsqY7I In this YouTube video I'll give you a FULL DEMONSTRATION of how to write a nice task 1 response. You'll learn: 1. How to prepare your task 1 2. How to write a two sentence intro 3. How to write a four sentence details/comparison section 4. How to write a two sent...
by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 28, 2020 6:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing task-2 practice for checking.
Replies: 2
Views: 8558

Re: IELTS writing task-2 practice for checking.

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by goldcoastielts
Mon Oct 26, 2020 11:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pleasse evaluate writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 8131

Re: Pleasse evaluate writing task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Oct 25, 2020 1:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Feedback is much appreciated
Replies: 1
Views: 7841

Re: Task 2 writing. Feedback is much appreciated

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Oct 24, 2020 5:21 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : IELTS Task 2 - 6-sentence IELTS body paragraph
Replies: 0
Views: 26536

YouTube : IELTS Task 2 - 6-sentence IELTS body paragraph

Hi ! ;) https://youtu.be/fzlysmGLNXA In the last task 2 video I showed you how to write a simple 5-sentence IELTS body paragraph. In this video we explore the 6-sentence body paragraph.. In this YouTube video you'll learn how to write IELTS task 2 paragraphs with : S1 : Topic sentence S2 : Contrast ...
by goldcoastielts
Fri Oct 23, 2020 2:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing practice for checking
Replies: 2
Views: 8524

Re: IELTS writing practice for checking

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Oct 23, 2020 2:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate writing task 1 General
Replies: 3
Views: 8596

Re: please evaluate writing task 1 General

Keep doing your best! :ugeek: