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by suribright
Wed Jul 02, 2014 7:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please comment and rate my essay. Thanks
Replies: 3
Views: 823

Re: please comment and rate my essay. Thanks

Hi Argho, Thank for your comments. Yes you are right to say that there are several diet words in my essay and good idea to change to different form. Your essay is so good to me. It looks like a professional diet man :). Several words I do not know such as carbohydrates, hypertension . It is so diffi...
by suribright
Wed Jul 02, 2014 12:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please comment and rate my essay. Thanks
Replies: 3
Views: 823

please comment and rate my essay. Thanks

Topic task 2: Dieting can change a person's life for a better or ruin one's health completely. What is your opinion? Diet to loose a weight has increasingly become prevalent to the modern society. Some people strongly believe that our lives are better with diet while others argue that is harmful to ...
by suribright
Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: "get off" vs. "drop off"
Replies: 2
Views: 856

Re: "get off" vs. "drop off"

Hi allen_zhang and durai,

I think this link may clarify what you want. http://forum.wordreference.com/showthread.php?t=981697

For me, I may use " go out at the coastal station"

Cheers,
by suribright
Sun Jun 29, 2014 2:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need your editation for my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 643

Need your editation for my essay

Hi all, Please edit this essay for me. I hope it will have an improvement comparing to my first essay. In addition, I must say that it is more difficult writing on the paper than typing in the computer. Thanks. Task 2 topic: More and more people move from areas where they grew up to find jobs. Does ...
by suribright
Fri Jun 27, 2014 12:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you please edit and mark for me this essay?
Replies: 3
Views: 780

Re: Could you please edit and mark for me this essay?

Hi Durai, Your comments mean a lot to me. I think I have to practice more. I can see what is wrong with my essay while I was reading your notes. It sounds like I have to improve a lot on grammar and spelling. It is not so easy to recognise these problems to me. I will try to write an essay every day...
by suribright
Thu Jun 26, 2014 2:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you please edit and mark for me this essay?
Replies: 3
Views: 780

Re: Could you please edit and mark for me this essay?

Hi all, Could any one mark my essay above please? It sounds strange to me with 24 hits but no answer. I would like you to point out what I need to improve more. I wrote my essay following 15 steps of Ryan's guidance on youtube. However, I need to know how my ability is and at what level I am now. Th...
by suribright
Tue Jun 24, 2014 2:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you please edit and mark for me this essay?
Replies: 3
Views: 780

Could you please edit and mark for me this essay?

Hi all, This is my first time using this website. I think it is really good. - Could you please edit and mark for me this essay below? - could you please recommend a gap to improve based on this essay? - Also please give me useful links to recent topics for general Ielts test. I would like to write ...