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An item you purchased online arrived defective. Write a letter to the company you purchased the item from. In your letter state the details of the order describe what the problem is explain what you want the company to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your ...

Hi Durai, Thanks for the comments.. The main reason of why I wrote old people in first supporting para is.. I started the para identifying the sector or age group who stays in job for a long time. The reason why they stay in jobs because they are less adaptable to changes, for them security and stab...

Hi Ryan and Flick,

Can you please grade the essay write up which I had posted a couple of days back in my previous post in this thread. Its weird that no one is replying.

Hope to get a reply.

Thanks
Argho

Question) Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion People's view about whether to continue in the same job or look for different job opportunity has been a topic of interest...

Hi Flick,

Can you please grade my essay which I have posted over here.

I am getting very nervous.

Thanks
Argho

PLEASE grade ASAP

Hi Allen,

Thanks for your prompt reply,

I understand what you said and will use simple and short sentences.

Its a request , can you please read the whole essay and critisise rather than just giving comment on first para.

Thanks
Argho

Question: Some people feel that entertainers ( eg, film stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other type of Job should be highly paid? Now a days entertainers are been remunarised with heafty dollars for their performace.The topic discussed above needs a opinion that whethe...

I know its a argumentative essay, but in order to come to a conclusion that whether it has advantages or disadvantages, we need to discuss the both sides. That's what I would have done in exam conditions too!!! It's an "advantages or disadvantages" question. Hence, you can discuss either o...

Hi Durai, Looking at the Task 2 essay topic, I thought of this structure Intro: Start with a opening sentence like " pursuing a good and challenging job is every person's dream" Supporting para 1: giving advantages of why people are going overseas to find jobs some points: more opportuniti...

Hi, I don't think it will be much of help , however in my case I got a shocking 5 band in writing :o taking the fact the I am a research student in one of the good universities in Melbourne , Australia. I have applied for re evaluation Book for the next test and hope for the best. Thanks Argho Gener...