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Hi everybody! Please, give your comment. (Aim - band 7) Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay. Different people prefer different methods...

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits? The rapid development in th...

Essay Question - "Internet has a negative effect on personality development among young people. Discuss this statement and form an opinion ." - This is a discussion essay. The question requires to discuss only negative effect. However the subject can be analysed and discussed from opposin...

You are attending a part time course in a college. Due to some problem, you cannot continue your course. Write a letter to your teacher - Describe the course - Explain the problem - Explain the reason for not continuing - Tell the teacher about your future plans Dear Sir, I am Harsha Senarathne and...

Hi,

Nicely written..

Thanks
Argho

Ravian wrote:Dear argho,
Sever means "BAD".

Hi Ravian,

In what way you think its bad.. kindly elaborate!!!

Argho

Ravian wrote:Thank you for your time to review an essay, but you have made it more severe by adding your own ideas!

Hi Ravian,

I am unclear what you meant.. severe can be good or bad.. Please explain..

Argho

Being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that a being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? ______________________________________________________________________ A well known film actor or a sports player while ...

i need six on each band....but i am shocked to see my wife results i know she even cant get more than 5 ..and she got 6 in writing i am totally disastisfied with the IELTS result, i feel shocked to see results...its not about mine..its about other person who i know cannot score more than five has g...

hi i have give my last exam with my wife in sydney, australia i have got R 6 L6.5 w 5.5 S 7 i need six on each band....but i am shocked to see my wife results i know she even cant get more than 5 ..and she got 6 in writing i am totally disastisfied with the IELTS result, i feel shocked to see resul...

YOU TRAVELED BY LONG DISTANCE BUS RECENTLY AND YOUR SUITCASE WAS DAMAGED.WRITE A LETTER TO THE BUS COMPANY.IN YOUR LETTER. INFORM THE BUS COMPANY OF WHEN AND TO WHERE YOU TRAVELED. DESCRIBE YOUR SUITCASE AND WHAT HAPPENED TO IT. EXPLAIN WHY THE COMPANY SHOULD PAY FOR A NEW SUITCASE. Dear Sir or Mad...

BUYING FASHIONABLE CLOTHES IS WASTEFUL BECAUSE PEOPLE DON'T NEED NEW CLOTHES ALL THE TIME.CLOTHING SHOULD BE BOUGHT AND USED MORE WISELY. DO YOU AGREE? Fashion industry is fastest and largest growing business in the world because people have developed penchant towards designing clothes.However it h...

allen_zhang wrote:I got a even worse result:

L 7.5 ;R 6.5; W 7; S 5.5

I never thought that I will fail on reading.
I scored 7 on speaking before.

the only good thing is that I got 7 on writing this time.

Hi Allen,

Did you gave your exam in Australia or in your home country.

Thanks
Argho

Hi Guys, My result is worst ever; L 8.5, R 7, S 6, W 6.5 I never expected such low score in my speaking, in fact I scored band 7 on my last exam in Speaking; also after one month of hard work...talking to people on Skype...never think of such band.. I know something went wrong; but need to analyse ...

Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study? Over the past few decades, students interest towards attending school are diminishing. Some pupils have negative experience and pretending not to attend classes. The reasons co...

Hi everybody I have exam on 12 july Please help me in this essay Although countries with long average working hours are economically successful, this often has some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree Obviously, the average of long working hours cannot be able to r...

Hi Argho, Thank for your comments. Yes you are right to say that there are several diet words in my essay and good idea to change to different form. Your essay is so good to me. It looks like a professional diet man :). Several words I do not know such as carbohydrates, hypertension . It is so diff...

Topic task 2: Dieting can change a person's life for a better or ruin one's health completely. What is your opinion? The idea of choosing the correct form of eating so as to loose weight has been a topic of interest for many years .Diet to loose a weight has increasingly become prevalent to the mod...

tobacco and are drugs that cause addiction and health problems should they be made illegal like other drugs? Or should all drugs be legalize? What do you think about these ideas? Following structure can be adapted Over the years, there has been a debate of whether tobacco or other harmful drugs sho...

Thank you so much for your help, but I have a question. Shouldn't I give my opinion in the introduction paragraph ONLY when it is a " do you agree/disagree" or " to what extent do you agree/disagree" question? Thanks :) Hi, according to me, when you have stated a stand that you ...

Do you feel the effects of tourism are more positive or negative for the host country? It is often argued that tourism can have a negative effect on the host country. However, taking into account the popularity of tourism worldwide, it is felt that tourism has more pros than cons for the host count...

Hi Somnil, The word length is long and however, your negative side explanation is not clear. You could have said that, sometimes a tourist destination develops a negative image by itself with the help of different experiences visitors had. For example. Bali , a major tourist destination in Indonesia...

Over the recent years, there has been a enormous development in various fields of technologies. Mode of communication have often got changed as compared to the old traditional ways. However, it is generalised that, this development has affected several people's personal relationship. The essay will ...

Write a letter to the municipal government. In your letter describe a problem you’ve experienced in the city suggest a way the city can eliminate this problem explain how this will improve life in the city Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follow...

Thanks Argho! How do you think it will fetch? Is it possible for you to review my other essays too? :) Hi Somnil, I cant predict on the band what this letter will fetch.. Don't worry about that. Just follow the structure with correct grammer and linking words and you will be fine. I am also struggl...