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Thanks a lot Saran and duo , you are of great help . Saran , fantastic tips . I will try my best . Yes , I am able to imagine now what others are deriving from my paragraph . I think it was very helpful and I will try to incorporate some ideas in future . Infact , I will rewrite the same para .i lik...

Hello Everyone ,

Please let me know about my grammatical mistakes or your views .

Thanks
Tina

The graph below compares the changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. The graph illustrates the trend of birth rates of two countries C...

Q Do you think society is responsible for increase in rate of crime ? What do you think are the reasons for increased crime and what measures can be taken to reduce crime ? The increase in the crime rate raises many concerns regarding its causation. As far as, society is concerned, there are multipl...

Thanks for correction. I really appreciate your patience .

Regards,
Tina .

Hi Ryan ,

Thanks a lot for your valuable suggestions .

Regards
Tina .

Some people think that good health is a basic human need，so medical service should be run by the government instead of profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages? Good health is of paramount importance for the normal functioning of the hum...

missing letter need feedback by saran » Thu Sep 12, 2013 12:09 am You lost something on the train. Write a letter to the stationmaster of your local train station. In your letter • state what the item is • describe where you think you lost it • explain how you can be contacted in the event the item ...

1 Avoid heartfelt n official letters , you are writing to your parents . 2 enlighten is not correct word . You can explain to them . 3 you are writing to your sponsor , so why r u writing that with the help of your sponsor . It's incorrect . 4 you have not yet started project report so why are you t...

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for sponsoring my project. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for awarding a sponsorship for my project . As you know, I am doing research in motion technology, as I mentioned in my previous letter for the colle...

Please take my criticism positively . I think using paradoxical debate , palpable logic etc are not appropriate connective words. I noticed lot of grammatical mistakes . Structure of writing is good . I would like to ask you , if we have to write it as an argument topic or needs to discuss both the ...

Re: bank letter need feedback by saran » Wed Sep 11, 2013 11:09 pm thanks a lot to tina,raj and luciano.. improved letter...guys pls review it.. You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Wri...

Thanks Ryan . I am glad to see your appearance .
Regards

Well done Raj , it's a nice presentation . Let's see the comments of Ryan . I think u can easily achieve desired score in this . Could you think and write it up in 40 minutes . I personally feel time is a major factor in exam . When are you appearing for the exam ? Let's help each other as much as p...

Hi Saran ,

Could you notice structure in my paragraph this time . I heard Ryan's video . As you know is difficult to apply . Anyways thanks for your feedback . At least u r trying .

True , but you know it's so difficult to remember this typical form in the exam that too in 40 minutes . Ya , I agree that you have a point .

Take care of grammar in standard phrases like Looking forward for your response at the earliest . If you have any concern , please do not hesitate to contact me. The money you have deducted from my account rather than taken .Nobody takes your money , it's is always deducted automatically by computer...

Using computers everyday can have more negative than positive effects on your children . Do you agree or disagree ? Computers are inevitable commodity now a days . Children are equally fond and habituated of computers . There are lot of benefits of using computer however , we cannot deny the fact t...

Dear Saran , I tried to find some errors in your letter as per your request . Please don't mind and I re- emphasize that I am not good in English too. But at a glance I noticed grammatical mistakes in your letter . Its nice if you reframe the same and post it again . Thanks .

You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. In your letter • write what the erroneous banking service is • explain why this is in error
• describe what you would li...

Are you preparing for academic module ? You have seen my write up . Do u think , I am capable to find out corrections in your letter . I don't think it's a good idea . I , myself struggling for writing skills and to get Band 7 and searching for a guide who can correct my tasks . Please don't mind . ...

Thanks Saran , you are absolutely correct . I will follow your advice.

Hi Ryan , Please mark my essay too . This is my first visit in this forum All of us appreciate the creative ideas and obviously the creative persons . It is an important issue to discuss that what measures , we should take in order to save the talent of creative persons. Actually , it is quiet a deb...