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Thank you for your reply Jonson, it is helpful to me and I will redo this essay with your suggestion. Please help me further if you can. By the way, in my opinion, "a job with high level of security" is as same as "a permanent job", is that true? Please correct me if I was wrong....

Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. An ideal job has been viewed as one of the most essential elements of successful...