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by Johnson zhang
Wed May 28, 2014 4:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please, review this essay task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 850

Re: Please, review this essay task 2

Museums are a plentiful source of information what do you mean and they are visited by thousands of different people every day. By paying a simple visit to a museum, people can enhance their knowledge of what? and culture. Whether the purpose of museums must be solely education or they should be con...
by Johnson zhang
Wed May 28, 2014 1:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: A grammar discussion : omitting "that"
Replies: 3
Views: 865

Re: A grammar discussion : omitting "that"

youngshelock

very interesting post. I guess a lot of writers would have been in a similar stage at some point in their life.
by Johnson zhang
Tue May 27, 2014 12:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Where my task 1 stands?
Replies: 3
Views: 1404

Re: Where my task 1 stands?

where is the chart?
by Johnson zhang
Tue May 27, 2014 5:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 2.4
Replies: 3
Views: 1341

Re: task 2.4

My version of important sentences for your essay. Please read I think you clearly know enough to write a good essay. although your essay is deficient in clarity. Q, Some say that due to heavy traffic governments need to build more roads in metropolitan cities, while others argue this isn’t the righ...
by Johnson zhang
Tue May 27, 2014 3:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General writing part 1 - Looking for a part time job
Replies: 2
Views: 1757

Re: General writing part 1 - Looking for a part time job

not bad, what were your special skills ?
by Johnson zhang
Tue May 27, 2014 1:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay part 2 - Writing test
Replies: 6
Views: 5062

Re: Essay part 2 - Writing test

Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it and therefore international aid should not be given to poor countries. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion. With the huge e...
by Johnson zhang
Mon May 26, 2014 3:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay Practice Task 2 and related question
Replies: 8
Views: 1575

Re: Essay Practice Task 2 and related question

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? News agency is socially responsible in providing good news to the audience at large and it is...
by Johnson zhang
Mon May 26, 2014 4:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: HI need feedback and rating. Please comment.
Replies: 5
Views: 1137

Re: HI need feedback and rating. Please comment.

You need to improve a lot on like everything mate.....

If i were you, i would exercise using simple sentence to express my ideas first.
by Johnson zhang
Mon May 26, 2014 1:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Letter,my first letter,please review and provide comments
Replies: 8
Views: 2944

Re: GT Letter,my first letter,please review and provide comm

Also do not forget to add discount.

Are you commanding ??? lol
by Johnson zhang
Mon May 26, 2014 1:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help with task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1069

Re: Help with task 2

On the one hand
fututhermore/ In addition
You could also combine them into one para

Other the other hand
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 25, 2014 1:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can i get 7 by this challenging task 2 topics
Replies: 4
Views: 1110

Re: Can i get 7 by this challenging task 2 topics

According to the film actor Jhon Wyane “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life”. How important it is for individual and the government thinking about the future rather than focusing on the present ? this is a seriously deep question. I doubt students would see it in exams. A constructive plan ...
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 25, 2014 1:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help with task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1069

Re: Help with task 2

intro Thanks to the improvement in technologies, students and employees are not restricted in the choice of location where they endeavour to accomplish tasks. This is because of the advancement in electronic communication in both speed and forms. It is however argued that this trend involves both p...
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 25, 2014 1:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help with task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1069

Re: Help with task 2

are you aware that you made a major mistake , supporting para 1 is for , para 2 is for but because you put 'on the other hand', readers think it is against
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 25, 2014 8:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please give me feedback with bands for this topic
Replies: 2
Views: 928

Re: please give me feedback with bands for this topic

everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs' regardless of their level of academic ability education is must in today's era and universities are the bridge to obtain a bright future career so in my opine,every student has the rights to allow admission in university without con...
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 25, 2014 8:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1
Replies: 3
Views: 1005

Re: Writing Task 1

By the way of conclusion, ???
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 25, 2014 5:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay about artworks in public places, please help to check.
Replies: 2
Views: 778

Re: Essay about artworks in public places, please help to ch

Governments spend large amount of money in art and work such as painting and sculptures in public places? Is it a good or bad thing? It is quite common to see statues, paintings and sculptures in public places such as parks, squares and streets in big cities. While some people argue that these art p...
by Johnson zhang
Sat May 24, 2014 3:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can anyone provide feedback and possible mark to my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 693

Re: Can anyone provide feedback and possible mark to my essa

Q:Watching television can help students to learn efficiently. Therefore, we should encourage them to spend time on watching television at school and at home. Do you agree or disagree? Thanks to the development in technologies, television are not limited to its originally function of entertaining peo...
by Johnson zhang
Sat May 24, 2014 2:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: HI need feedback and rating. Please comment.
Replies: 5
Views: 1137

Re: HI need feedback and rating. Please comment.

Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. agree or disagree? Answer: Sports are not only meant for physical activity and refreshment,??? if the Sports events wer...