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Got overall 7.5 but it's no use because I got 6.5 in writing. Really disappointed with this result don't know if I need to re-check or sit again. Does anyone know who checks the writing scripts ? Is it checked in the same country one is giving exam or is it sent to a different country. What about re...

Does the questions vary from country to country, because the questions here is certainly different.

If you are looking to get band 8, this is probably not the place to assess your writing score. You need professional assessors to view your work. Here in the forum, we can only give you advice, grammar mistake it's not wise to guess on scores. Both tasks look fine, but remember to keep things simple !

Thanks for your feedback, I did have a hard time thinking about which way to write it. Couple of points, the introductions is about discussing both sides so I don't have to state my opinion now. The first para could have ended better to give a better outcome. Other paragraphs needed more conclusive ...

There appears to be too many grammar, sentence, spelling mistakes. Your ideas are not in order, word choice needs to be a lot better, presentation is not to the standard. Conclusion should be one paragraph, you should look at sample essays, and fix the fundamentals before attempting to write a whole...

Can computerized data collection on individuals be justified even though it endangers the rights of individuals ? Privacy is a major concern for people in this technological age. New technologies and different ways of collecting data is easily available. Every individual must have the right to know...

For Listening- you need to practice more....if you are at band 7 level---then stop answering the question, but just listen and check whether you recall that particular section , say question 31 - 36; listen more then if you understand all the contents in any sections then you can easily reach band ...

Thanks for your feedback, I keep making the same mistakes using one word many times ! Wish we could use editors in exams.

Really excellent essay, very few mistakes; you could have provided more examples in your second para, but looks like you will get a good score anyway.

Please critic mine: http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=2262

You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain your situation - describe your problems - tell him/her when you think you can move in Dear Mr. John, I am glad to have found s...

Well written, your problem does not seem to be on task achievement because you have put good examples and discussed the topic well. Grammar, sentence structure is again the issue, although not a lot. I suggest you try to write slowly as I make mistakes when I write fast, put different synonyms in th...

Decent essay, sentence structure does not have good flow try to use different words, your reference "which one" to subject not accurate you should mention subject before. Your conclusion could be better try to keep it to point. Critic my essay http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&...

Your essay seems good, you gave good descriptions and examples, however your introduction could be better avoid using quotes, grammar is often not correct, try to use different synonyms some words just did not fit well in the sentence. Please critic my essay : http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.p...

In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening ? How far is this situation true in your country? Globalization has changed every...

You could have structured it better, don't start a paragraph with the word 'Basically', you could put the first statement and second paragraph into one.

You are also assuming about the work, don't assume it until it is clearly stated.

Overall it's a good essay, your ideas and presentations are in order. However the grammar needs to improve. Sentence structure is not in order and you will loose marks for this.

Hi, you have a cute voice, are you asian ? It appears your pronunciation of certain words is unclear, you need to speak more clearly and loudly. For e.g. when you said the word whales, it sounded waales, I didn't pick up the 'hhh' in the pronunciation. It is also sounds generic like you are memorizi...

Your examples are ok, but it's not convincing, you need to convince the reader with more bolder and stronger arguments. Grammatical mistakes are there, what you need to do now is first correct the grammatical mistakes, then make better and stronger arguments and rewrite the essay.

Thanks everyone for replying, yes I misunderstood the whole essay, that's why I was very disappointed in myself.

Hi, Can anyone please provide me feedback for the writing task 2 for GT, if you can also estimate the score I will get better. Topic: Poverty exists all over the world in every country. Different countries deal with poverty in a different way. What can governments do to reduce poverty ? Since the be...

The article lacks proper grammar, sentence structure and spelling mistake. It is described well, but you need to write proper way.