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by vivianlyl04
Sun May 25, 2014 11:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: In many countries
Replies: 3
Views: 1672

Re: Could anyone grade my General Task 2 essay and feedback

Thanks Johnson.
by vivianlyl04
Fri May 23, 2014 1:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Correct my essay.
Replies: 14
Views: 3146

Re: Please Correct my essay.

Thanks Durai , it is very helpful. I also think that i repeat some point ...
by vivianlyl04
Fri May 23, 2014 11:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: In many countries
Replies: 3
Views: 1672

Re: Could anyone grade my General Task 2 essay and feedback

Please.....
by vivianlyl04
Fri May 23, 2014 2:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Correct my essay.
Replies: 14
Views: 3146

Re: Please Correct my essay.

Hi durai, I wrote a essay for the same topic as above, Could you please review and give me some advise please?I am taking General Test and i am aiming for 6~6.5. Many many many....Thanks... With the remarkable development of technology, computer has been playing a significant role in various fields ...
by vivianlyl04
Fri May 23, 2014 2:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: In many countries
Replies: 3
Views: 1672

In many countries

Qestion:
In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing, Does this trend make positive or negative effects to society.