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by Rahebb
Fri May 11, 2018 5:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Traffic.(plz evaluate me and band me)
Replies: 2
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Re: Traffic.(plz evaluate me and band me)

We don't use an article before the name of a country Take the China as an example. "as well as flourish traffic congestion" should be "as well as flourishing... (use a gerund). "suburban area" not "suburb area" "It is one of the main reason" should be &qu...
by Rahebb
Fri Apr 13, 2018 5:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my second essay for Task 1
Replies: 1
Views: 18955

Please evaluate my second essay for Task 1

The given table illustrates the information about the proportion of passengers who travelled via three large airports in Britain over a five-year period from 1998 and 2003. Overall, what stands out from the graph shows that there was an upward trend in the number people who used Gatwick airport in c...
by Rahebb
Fri Apr 13, 2018 11:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Evaluate my first Writing Task one
Replies: 0
Views: 32478

Please Evaluate my first Writing Task one

The graph illustrates the information about the number of students who are expected to study three popular languages, namely English, Spanish, and Mandarin over a ten-year period from 2020 to 2030. Overall, what stands out from the graph suggests that the number of students of all three languages is...