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Question : Some countries, young people of eighteen years are allowed to do things such as vote, drive car, or marry. In some other countries they have to be older. What you think the age should be to take adult responsibilities? Answer: Age for handling responsibility is not the same across the wor...

Hi robin, Thanks for your comments. I have updated my essay as per your remarks. Kindly review .. According to me School education play’s vital role in shaping a person behaviour and health. I do agree the fact that our education system is not teaching children to take care of their health; In my co...

please review my essay. I am keen on knowing how much i got improved.

Question : Schools do not do anything to teach children to how to take care of their health. Do you agree or disagree ? Answer : School education play’s vital role in shaping a person behaviour and health. Moreover Education means not only improving mental ability; it also should educate about the p...

Hi Durai,

Thanks for your continous feedback mate.

I will work on the area as u suggested.

kindly rate pls. Need to find my band .

Hi Durai,

Yes i am also from Tamilnadu . I put up in chennai.

Thanks for your guidance. I will try ryan'w website.


regards
P.S.Saravanan

Essay topic: Dieting can change a person’s life for the better or ruin one’s health completely. What is your opinion? Answer : Obesity is become one of the common problem nowadays. Because of obesity even young aged peoples were having heart diseases. Dieting is one of the solutions for this problem...

Now i got it . Thanks for the explanation .

Hi durai,

Thanks for the feedback. I will try to improve. However, whether is it not advisable to have 4 paragraph's?

I got confused ..

Question: Even though globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss. Globalisation has made economy to grow and in turn also improve the lifestyle of people. Even though it has made our life stylish, we are also facing challeng...

CUE CARD:

Describe your childhood room,

you should say:
What it looked like
What was in it
What you did in the room
and explain what you liked about the room

Thanks for the suggestion mate. Yes i understand that i have to go very long to achieve 7.5 score.
I will do lot of exercise to improve . Kindly keep giving suggestions like this mate. Its make me understand the areas i have to focus.

Dear Johnson zhang,

Thanks for your time and comments. I will work on structuring the essay.

regards
saravanan

please grade my writing. Will i get 7 points for this essay .pls help .

:cCUE CARD : Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. Answer: Sports are not only meant for physical activity and refereshment, if the Sports events were organi...

Dear Sir,

Thanks for your time and your feedback. I will work on grammer and Sentence pattern .

Thanks & regards
P.S.Saravanan

CUE CARD :
Descirbe a child you know, you should say:
How you know him or her what he or she like to do . What kind of person she is and explain how you feel about this child.