hi tina,,,,
thankssssss a lotttttttt
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- Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:53 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8753
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Creative persons should be paid or not
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5079
Re: Creative persons should be paid or not
hi tina,
i know that....but the concept is you know something which i dont know..i know something which u dont know..i am also trying to get band 7 ..in general .so that why...please try you can...
i know that....but the concept is you know something which i dont know..i know something which u dont know..i am also trying to get band 7 ..in general .so that why...please try you can...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:20 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Creative persons should be paid or not
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5079
Re: Creative persons should be paid or not
hi tina,
can u help me out...by reviewing my letter what mistake i have made...
can u help me out...by reviewing my letter what mistake i have made...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:19 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8753
Re: bank letter need feedback
hi raj,,
thanks a lot man...and i am wondering did u find any mistake in my letter...
thanks a lot man...and i am wondering did u find any mistake in my letter...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:21 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Creative persons should be paid or not
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5079
Re: Creative persons should be paid or not
hi tina,
i think u havent check ryan writing structure videos...please go and watch the videos...thanks
i think u havent check ryan writing structure videos...please go and watch the videos...thanks
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:57 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8753
Re: bank letter need feedback
guyssss
please don't view the page and go off....whatever comes in your mind about this letter just post it..thanks
please don't view the page and go off....whatever comes in your mind about this letter just post it..thanks
- Tue Sep 10, 2013 7:01 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8753
bank letter need feedback
You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. In your letter • write what the erroneous banking service is • explain why this is in error
• describe what you would li...
- Mon Sep 02, 2013 5:06 pm
- Forum: Latest IELTS questions
- Topic: ILETS - AUS - Task 1 - General Training Question - 17/08/13
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3341
Re: ILETS - AUS - Task 1 - General Training Question - 17/08
hi leela, one thing I found in your writing is this sentence "He nodded his head but didn't respond in an expected manner".i feel like its inappropriate.Try to use more words like in addition,moreover,besides,not only that,thus,therefore.don't forget to use small letter Yours Sincerely-You...