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by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8753

Re: bank letter need feedback

hi tina,,,,
thankssssss a lotttttttt
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Creative persons should be paid or not
Replies: 10
Views: 5079

Re: Creative persons should be paid or not

hi tina,
i know that....but the concept is you know something which i dont know..i know something which u dont know..i am also trying to get band 7 ..in general .so that why...please try you can...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Creative persons should be paid or not
Replies: 10
Views: 5079

Re: Creative persons should be paid or not

hi tina,
can u help me out...by reviewing my letter what mistake i have made...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8753

Re: bank letter need feedback

hi raj,,
thanks a lot man...and i am wondering did u find any mistake in my letter...
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Creative persons should be paid or not
Replies: 10
Views: 5079

Re: Creative persons should be paid or not

hi tina,
i think u havent check ryan writing structure videos...please go and watch the videos...thanks
by saran
Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8753

Re: bank letter need feedback

guyssss
please don't view the page and go off....whatever comes in your mind about this letter just post it..thanks
by saran
Tue Sep 10, 2013 7:01 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8753

bank letter need feedback

You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. In your letter • write what the erroneous banking service is • explain why this is in error
• describe what you would li...
by saran
Mon Sep 02, 2013 5:06 pm
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: ILETS - AUS - Task 1 - General Training Question - 17/08/13
Replies: 3
Views: 3341

Re: ILETS - AUS - Task 1 - General Training Question - 17/08

hi leela, one thing I found in your writing is this sentence "He nodded his head but didn't respond in an expected manner".i feel like its inappropriate.Try to use more words like in addition,moreover,besides,not only that,thus,therefore.don't forget to use small letter Yours Sincerely-You...