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- Tue Oct 22, 2013 11:16 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please help me to correct my eassay. Many thanks
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Please help me to correct my eassay. Many thanks
Today, people seem to be beautiful and activate, it leads to a common argument that people take much time to notice on their appearance than they did in the past. From my point of views, I completely disagree with this statement because of several reasons which would be present in this essay. First ...
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 8:51 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please help me to correct my essay
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Re: Please help me to correct my essay
HI, I would advice you to write 1or 2 sentences as background in introduction paragraph. In addition, I have corrected some mistakes. Topic: Some people who can not work with computer is disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree? While there are grounds to argue that it would be disadv...
- Mon Oct 21, 2013 3:03 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please help me to correct my essay
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Please help me to correct my essay
Topic: Some people who can not work with computer is disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree? While there are grounds to argue that it would be disadvantaged if people cannot work with computer, it can be equally argue that this would be advantaged. In this essay shall examine the mer...