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How to reduce crime rate? Longer prison sentences or by alternative ways ? Discuss both and give your opinion


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FastTrackIELTS wrote:Hi Wangy,

How are your studies going so far?

Jordan

It's slow, Jordan [emoji29]


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Hi Wangyue, Where is the question? How can I check your essay, when I don't know what the question is? Send it in word document. How can I correct your hand-written essay, when it requires a lot many corrections. Prabhakar reddy Professor of English and IELTS Tutor Email. preddy2407Gmail.com The to...

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Hello! Overall, a reasonable essay. There are plenty of grammatical errors, but the range is reasonable and the essay can be understood. However, your points are not well-developed. The points are valid, as far as I'm concerned, but you don't do well at distinguishing which are more likely (in your...

Hello! Overall, a reasonable essay. There are plenty of grammatical errors, but the range is reasonable and the essay can be understood. However, your points are not well-developed. The points are valid, as far as I'm concerned, but you don't do well at distinguishing which are more likely (in your...

I have been very busy recently but should have more free time in February. If you have posted any essays that you want me to check and I have missed them, just repost them AS A FRESH THREAD. David https://uploads.tapatalk-cdn.com/20170130/9af2f4a7bfb7c4cce0e5ba0b4969b590.jpg https://uploads.tapatal...

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Hello! This essay is quite good. you have presented good arguments with some development. Vocabulary and grammar are clear, despite some mistakes, and there is a good range of both. a range of connectives are used well. If I had to make one suggestion, it would be to deal with the argument that man...

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