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- Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:24 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade my letter - asking for loan
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1156
Re: pls grade my letter - asking for loan
As an international student in Sweden, you have an account with a local bank. The monthly bank transfer you receive from your parents has been delayed this month due to an error at your parents’ bank. Write a letter to your bank. In your letter: introduce yourself and ask for a loan, say why you ne...
- Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:21 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: General Writing - Task1-Letter to a Friend
- Replies: 2
- Views: 876
Re: General Writing - Task1-Letter to a Friend
Keeping up with Ryan's suggestion of writing daily, below is my take on a letter to a friend. Opinion/suggestions/band score welcome your friend is visiting you for a week. However, the dates that he/she is visiting are not suitable for you. write a letter to him/her and 1. Apologize 2. explain why...
- Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:19 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: My first essay following Ryan's template
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1688
Re: My first essay following Ryan's template
Dear community, This is my first post and I'm Anton from Kiev, Ukraine. All my writings have been scored band 6 to 6.5 for last few months. However, I've bought the Ryan's e-book recently and have wrote an essay following his 15 sentences template, paying closer attention to linking and discussing ...
- Mon Apr 21, 2014 4:00 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: AC writing task 2. Machine translation. Review please!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1138
Re: AC writing task 2. Machine translation. Review please!
Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree? ------------------------------------------------------------- Our world has changed greatly over t...
- Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:56 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please tell my mistakes and band deserving for this essay
- Replies: 2
- Views: 871
Re: please tell my mistakes and band deserving for this ess
[quote="neha"]Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their own ideas. There should be no government restrictions. Do you agree or disagree? - -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
- Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:47 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: My first task 2 Essay. Need your feedback
- Replies: 2
- Views: 751
Re: My first task 2 Essay. Need your feedback
Below is my first task 2 essay. I have tried to keep the essay structure as suggested by you Ryan. Would love to hear from you and others what you think on this. An increasing number of people are changing their career and place of residence several times in their li ves . Do you think this is a po...