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by katsenis
Wed Apr 16, 2014 7:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please mark my essay and make corrections. Thanks
Replies: 4
Views: 1110

Re: Please mark my essay and make corrections. Thanks

In may countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In today's ever evolving world, the diet and way of living th...
by katsenis
Wed Apr 16, 2014 7:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly critique my Task-1
Replies: 5
Views: 2196

Re: Kindly critique my Task-1

Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: - describe the problem with the dog - explain why it is important for you to sleep - outline what your neighbours could do about the situation. Dear Mr. & Mrs. XYZ, I hope this ...
by katsenis
Wed Apr 16, 2014 7:01 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me advice!! task 2 juvenile delinquency
Replies: 4
Views: 2787

Re: pls give me advice!! task 2 juvenile delinquency

What are the causes of juvenile delinquency and what are your solutions? In this age of change, the (do not need definite article here. You are speaking of society in general) human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of wh...
by katsenis
Wed Apr 16, 2014 6:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay - Task 2 : Traffic congestion
Replies: 3
Views: 2687

Re: Please evaluate my essay - Task 2 : Traffic congestion

With an increase in the number of vehicles on roads, the problem of traffic congestion has assumed alarming proportions in several major cities of the world. There are several excellent measures which need to be put in place to nip the problem of busy roads in the bud. Traffic snarls on the roads ha...
by katsenis
Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:32 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: how technology affect ways of life
Replies: 2
Views: 1213

Re: how technology affect ways of life

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In recent times, S s cience has greatly changed the traditional skills and lifestyle of the people. It is evi...
by katsenis
Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you please evaluate my writing for task 2?
Replies: 5
Views: 1617

Re: Could you please evaluate my writing for task 2?

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Agree or disagree? With advances in communication and the advent of modems and ser...
by katsenis
Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task II (I need some advice on writing)
Replies: 2
Views: 889

Re: Task II (I need some advice on writing)

There are some discussions regarding whether the (There is no need for the definite article here.) children might learn a foreign language during the (no need for definite article here) primary school or wait until the (no need for definite article) seconda r y school, when they are older and, conse...
by katsenis
Tue Apr 15, 2014 2:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my essay IELTS Writing Task 2
Replies: 8
Views: 5423

Re: please grade my essay IELTS Writing Task 2

Question: Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Children’s life nowadays is quite different in that they tend to have an unhealthy lifestyle. Some people believe that s...