hi
i was told by an ielts examiner that ielts writing especially the academic one should try to avoid too personal example...
and i would appreciate if u can give me some advise about my essay "writing need grading' , i just posted it this afternoon
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- Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:25 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2 < anyone there?>
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- Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2 < anyone there?>
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Re: task 2 < anyone there?>
hi there
i believe the example u utilized in the 3rd paragraph is too personal, so it is not persuasive to support your topic sentence in this paragraph.
i believe the example u utilized in the 3rd paragraph is too personal, so it is not persuasive to support your topic sentence in this paragraph.
- Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:50 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: writing need grading
- Replies: 1
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writing need grading
Some people think government should build public libraries in every town. Others believe it is a waste of money because we can get information via internet at home. Discuss both views. People have different views on whether public libraries should be replaced by the internet. Although this practice ...