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Thanks for the reply,
When I am reading back the question and my answer, I realized my mistake.

any comments on grammar part???

regards,
Jegan

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways to dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In the modern world, unfortunately all citizens ar...

You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to to him / her. In your letter: apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him / her say what you will do =======...

A healthy person is often described as someone has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoid stess, What should people do stay health in your country?? =========================================================================================================================== Over the last decad...

Hello there, my version of essay please asses it, Over the last decade, juvenile delinquency has significantly increased all over the world. The percent of teen who offends is so high that it would seem to be the cause of worry. This essay is an attempt to analyse the cause for this delinquency and ...

Hi allen,

"while there are certain concerns against this idea, I personally agree with it."

You are right, earlier i misunderstood.

thanks
Jegan

I my opinion, introduction and conclusion are contradicting with each other.. It is believed by some experts that the best age for children to learn a second language is at primary school. While[ Eventhough, ] there are certain concerns against this idea, I personally agree with it. On the one hand,...

Thanks Ryan for your comments. I tried to improve the answer, here is another attempt. ------------------------------- In last few decades, unemployment has significantly raised all over the world. Young graduates are struggling more than ever to build their career. This essay is going to analyse th...

Some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning a country's culture and experience, while others believe it is better to travel with someone you know. Discuss both these views and share your opinion. Travel industry is rapidly growing every year. It gives the break to routine j...

Thanks for the assessment. This helps me a lot .

You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city. Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In letter * give your reason for wanting the job. * explain why you think can do the job * describe the relevant experience -----------------...

Hey thanks for both of you. I will take these input seriously.

I need 7 band, I attended exams two times before.
L-8,R-7,S-7,W-5.5
L-7.5,R-7.5,S-7,w-6

I know my writing needs lot of improvement, can please suggest me some tips.

thanks,
Jegan

Many university graduates leave university facing uncertainty and unemployment. What are the causes and effects of this problem? Offer some solutions. ------------------------------ Over the last decade, unemployment has significantly increased all over the world. Number of fresh graduates are joble...

Something i found, Languages are the main form of a culture which (that) describes and appreciates its values and its richness. Many countries and cities have their own language which makes people of (the) particular background more comfortable in communicating with their close mates. It is importan...

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. ------------------------------------------------------------ Over the last decade, obesity among children has increased one fifth in we...

Durai,

Range of vocabulary and formation is good. However, first paragraph is bit deviated from the topic. You decided to talk about negative effects of advertisement but i feel the main focus is negative effect of television.

thanks,
Jegan

Hi there, First all of I am not english expert. Just I am sharing my view: For people living in big cities, there are usually two options for the type of accommodation: house and apartment. While some people prefer to live in a big house, some others favor apartment. (<-- Introduction needs to be ex...