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- Sun Aug 14, 2016 2:01 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 1. Many people dream of becoming a celebrity and of getting recognition of the public.
- Replies: 1
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GT Task 1. Many people dream of becoming a celebrity and of getting recognition of the public.
Dear IELTS mates, please give feedback for my Task 2 Essay. I would also appreciate if those of you who understand thoroughly IELTS writing band descriptors let me know what is probable band of this writing or give any other comments on the task response / coherence / lexical resources / grammatical...
- Sun Aug 14, 2016 12:37 pm
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- Topic: GT Task 1. You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work ...
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3008
GT Task 1. You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work ...
Dear IELTS mates, please give feedback for my Task 1 General Training Letter. I would also appreciate if those of you who understand thoroughly IELTS writing band descriptors let me know what is probable band of this writing or give any other comments on the task response / coherence / lexical resou...
- Sat Aug 13, 2016 3:14 pm
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- Topic: GT Task 2. Many young people today are too worried about the way they look and this causes problems.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 13086
GT Task 2. Many young people today are too worried about the way they look and this causes problems.
Dear IELTS mates, please give feedback for my Task 2 Essay. I would also appreciate if those of you who understand thoroughly IELTS writing band descriptors let me know what is probable band of this writing or give any other comments on the task response / coherence / lexical resources / grammatical...
- Sat Aug 13, 2016 2:29 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 1. An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 5759
GT Task 1. An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit.
Dear IELTS mates, please give feedback for my Task 1 General Training Letter. I would also appreciate if those of you who understand thoroughly IELTS writing band descriptors let me know what is probable band of this writing or give any other comments on the task response / coherence / lexical resou...
- Sat Aug 13, 2016 1:42 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 2. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development ...
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3622
Re: GT Task 2. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development ...
Flick, thank you very much.
- Sat Aug 13, 2016 1:42 pm
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- Topic: GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5251
Re: GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
Flick, thank you very much!
- Sat Jul 09, 2016 7:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please review my GT task 2
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1272
Re: please review my GT task 2
Dear DJvj, I also yesterday wrote the essay on this topic from IELTS10, Test B ;) Please find couple of my suggestions, which hopefully will be useful for you: Firstly, it helps them in improving their focus as they get distracted easily in this phase because of the curiosity - please note that this...
- Sat Jul 09, 2016 7:12 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please review my GT Task 2. Thanks a lot.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1363
Re: Please review my GT Task 2. Thanks a lot.
Dear Dzzz, I think your essay is excellent! I hope my minor suggestions will be useful for you: ... than public schools which does not separate -> than public schools, which do not separate ... lots of elite private schools, such as Oxford selecting there student -> lots of elite private schools, su...
- Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5251
Re: GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
Wannabe, thank you for the feedback.
I also found other synonyms (IELTS10, Test B) for toys, which may be useful for someone: playthings, interesting things to play with.
I also found other synonyms (IELTS10, Test B) for toys, which may be useful for someone: playthings, interesting things to play with.
- Fri Jul 08, 2016 10:20 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please review my GT task 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 928
Re: please review my GT task 2
My friend, please find a couple of my suggestions. growth seen in the travelers compared = growth seen in the number of travelers compared highlight the reason and growth of the traveling - not clear, do you mean "the reason of the growth in traveling" or something else? People are traveli...
- Fri Jul 08, 2016 10:03 am
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- Topic: GT Task 1. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4067
Re: GT Task 1. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
David,
Thank you very much for your feedback!
Thank you very much for your feedback!
- Fri Jul 08, 2016 10:00 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 2. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development ...
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3622
Re: GT Task 2. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development ...
David,
Thank you for your feedback. Now, after learning different types of questions and relevant essay structures, I also can see that the structure of my essay is very confusing.
Thank you for your feedback. Now, after learning different types of questions and relevant essay structures, I also can see that the structure of my essay is very confusing.
- Fri Jul 08, 2016 9:51 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5251
GT Task 2. Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
Dear IELTS mates, please give feedback for my Task 2 General Training Essay. I would also appreciate if those of you who understand thoroughly IELTS writing band descriptors let me know what is probable band of this writing or give any other comments on the task response / coherence / lexical resour...
- Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:58 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 1. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4067
GT Task 1. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Dear IELTS mates, please give feedback for my Task 1 General Training Letter. I would also appreciate if those of you who understand thoroughly IELTS writing band descriptors let me know what is probable band of this writing or give any other comments on the task response / coherence / lexical resou...
- Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:56 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: GT Task 2. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development ...
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3622
GT Task 2. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development ...
Dear IELTS mates, please give feedback for my Task 2 General Training Essay. I would also appreciate if those of you who understand thoroughly IELTS writing band descriptors let me know what is probable band of this writing or give any other comments on the task response / coherence / lexical resour...