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by yhjsaber
Sat Mar 22, 2014 4:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls help me check and give me a grade my reading
Replies: 4
Views: 932

Re: Pls help me check and give me a grade my reading

you made few grammatical mistakes in your essay like people "seems" and the first idea about why people generate more rubbish every is not clearly and sufficiently developed. I would say 6.5. If you correct thoses grammatical mistakes and make your structure more logical. 7.5 is possible o...
by yhjsaber
Sat Mar 22, 2014 1:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls help me check and give me a grade my reading
Replies: 4
Views: 932

Re: Pls help me check and give me a grade my reading

A problem of modern society is the ever increasing used plastic bags and different kinds of rubbish in our environment. Even worse is that most of these wastes are difficult to be disposed of, which causes considerable damage to our environment. In my opinion, the causes for this problem are threefo...
by yhjsaber
Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:02 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 1 - GT - band score pls :)
Replies: 2
Views: 6425

Re: Writing task 1 - GT - band score pls :)

I would say this letter could probably exceed band 7, I have modified it for your reference Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my interest in a company that has been advertised on your recruiting website. For your reference, the company is referred to as Columbus LLP which is specialized in p...
by yhjsaber
Fri Mar 21, 2014 11:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: To fellow IELTs students and teachers, Please grade my GT 1
Replies: 2
Views: 1095

Re: To fellow IELTs students and teachers, Please grade my G

I would say you would probably score 6.5, 7 at most here is the modified one Dear Kmart’s manager, I am writing to complain about your low-quality kettle and to express my disappointment at your poor after-sale service. First of all, the stainless steel kettle (Reference No: 0847210) I bought from y...
by yhjsaber
Fri Mar 21, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can anyone grade this for me? (GT)
Replies: 0
Views: 406

Can anyone grade this for me? (GT)

t has been suggested that people who live in big cities tend to lead an unhealthy life. As it has become evident that an increasing number of people living in urban areas suffer from health problems such as diabetes and heart disease, I tend to agree with this view and believe that this alarming tre...
by yhjsaber
Fri Mar 21, 2014 10:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 563

Re: pls help Task 2

It has been suggested that people who live in big cities tend to lead an unhealthy life. As it has become evident that an increasing number of people living in urban areas suffer from health problems such as diabetes and heart disease, I tend to agree with this view and believe that this alarming tr...
by yhjsaber
Fri Mar 21, 2014 8:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General training task 1: Job application
Replies: 0
Views: 566

General training task 1: Job application

Task 1: Apply for a job to be a tourist guide for local tourists. In the application letter you should state your strong points and week points for the position and express your eager for the job. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the position as a tourist guide for local peo...
by yhjsaber
Thu Mar 20, 2014 9:25 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: band 8 speaking and writing
Replies: 3
Views: 1140

band 8 speaking and writing

Hi, Ielts warriors Are you still preparing for the ielts test? I am looking for a speaking and writing partner. I scored 7.5 for speaking and 7 for listening in the previous test. I really want to secure a full band 8 in the next round, which will be on 17 May. My skype ID is carlen.yu. If you want ...
by yhjsaber
Thu Mar 20, 2014 9:23 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: SPeaking and writing partner(band 8)
Replies: 19
Views: 4885

Re: SPeaking and writing partner(band 8)

Hi are you still preparing for the ielts test? I am looking for a speaking and writing partner. I scored 7.5 for speaking and 7 for listening in the previous test. I really want to secure a full band 8 in the next round, which will be on 17 May. My skype ID is carlen.yu. If you want to have a tense ...