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Thanks for you comments. It was bit hard for me to approach this topic from a different standpoint. I also think most people would choose to avoid using corporal punishments. However, if I were to be creative by illustrating another point of view, I would probably gain more experience with two-way w...

Some people say that children should be disciplined in their early age, and punishment should be used. To some extent do you agree? What kind of punishment can be used by teachers and parents? People hold different views as to whether or not punishment is an effective way to cultivate a well-behaved...

Some reports have discovered the incidence of violence /crimes committed by young women is increasing. Give possible reasons and recommendations to the situation. It is true that the ever increasing rate at which female teenagers commit crimes is causing more serious problems to our society. There a...

Thank you for your comments. I have made amendments accordingly (highlightened in bold words). It looks like you have experience with many writing styles. However, I developed this style by analysing the model answers provided in every Cambridge IELTS book, which is basically free style. The only si...

People spend more and more time at their work place and don’t spend enough time with family and friends. Why is this happening? What consequences can this have for the family life and society? It is true that the ever intensifying competition in modern world is diminishing the amount of time people ...

Hi allen, I am no expert in spotting grammatical mistakes and correcting essays. However, after I had finished reading your essay, I felt it is not natural. I recommend you to read more articles and probably some novels. I suggest you to read a novel serious called "Divergent", do learn to...

Thank you Durai, I thought so as I wrote the second part of paragraph two, I felt like I if I were not to give a better alternative, it would affect the integrity of the essay. Anyway, I will try to shorten my essay. I have worked so hard trying to improve my grammar. Now it seems that making a conc...

Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources .To what extent do you agree or disagree? People hold different views as to whether or not air travel should be limited. Although the air pollution and the scarcity of ...

never begin a sentence in English with "and, but, so, then, because." "Because" and "but" are grammatically incorrect

People possess different views as to whether being raised up in the countryside or modernised cities is more beneficial to the growth of children. Although there are arguments for....., I believe.....

Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and personal experience People hold different views as to whether employers should persuade aged empl...

You find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund. Dear Professor Ahmed, I am writing to request your permission allowing me to withdraw from the Engineering Management and...

Sending criminals to the prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? People hold different views as to whether or not criminals should be sent to serve a prison sentence. Although there are some advantages of ...

Yeah, good idea. It is better to say that punishing criminals and educating them are not contradictory to each other.

Thanks allen, I am struggling with coming up with convincing examples to support my view. I am trying to read more articles and novels to enrich my ideas.

Sending criminals to the prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? People hold different views as to whether or not criminals should be sent to serve a prison sentence. Although there are some advantages of ...

allen_zhang wrote:What's your target score and what score you got before?

I am aiming at a full band 8 and I got 7.5 in writing last time

allen_zhang wrote:Wow! A very nice essay.
Can anyone grade this essay?
To me, it is 9!

Thanks allen, I spent 38 minutes on this essay and 20 minutes on typing it and correcting it. It is not much different from the original one expect that I elimited some repetition.

Many people think that money brings happiness, but others think that having too much money is a problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. People hold different views as to whether having an abundance of money leads to happiness or causes problems. Although securing a satisfactory salary...

Hi andytruong1202, Thank you for your efforts to correct my essay. I received 7 on writing last time I took the test. I definitely have improved but I think this essay would not exced band 8. There are many sentences and words looking unatural according to a native speaker. Besides, I wrote way more...

Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. The world that we live in today is dominated by advertising. Adverts are on TV, ...

One of your friend has asked you to be his new business partner. Write a letter to replay to your friend's offer. In your letter Give your opinions of your friend's business idea Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer And explain your reason for this decision Dear Derrick, I ho...

I really need some to help me shorten my essay. Thank you!! In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, or animal products for clothing and medicine, for example. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Recently, the vast developments have made more options availabl...

Food can be produced cheaper if we use improved fertilizers and better machinery. However some of methods may be dangerous for human health, and have negative effects for local communities. What is your opinion? In recent years, the vast improvements in technology have made a significant change to t...

Some people think it is a waste of money to establish libraries since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information, do you agree or disagree? In recent years, the development of information technology has revolutionized the way people receive information. Being abundant in informati...