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In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society? It is true that the contemporary world setting has resulted in less respect being shown to the elder. There are several factors contributin...

Hi allen, Thank you for your suggestion. Again, I was trying to look at this question from two different angles. Firstly, the increase in amount of rubbish is attributed to the growing population as well as people's tendency to use one-off products. Secondly, the prevalent industrial activities also...

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Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away society”, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To want degree do you agree with this opinion? It is true that the ever increasing waste produced from human activities...

From my point of view, there are several important features that are related to an ideal society. Firstly, abundant social wealth is important for a prosper society. A society where many of their fellow citizens cannot enjoy a satisfactory living standard can hardly be seen as “ideal”. Secondly, an ...

It is because I wrote too many task 2 essays .

You have a plan to go on a holiday and You have a friend that you want to go with. Write a letter to him and explain, Why you need a holiday? What’s your holiday plan? Why you want your friend to go with you? Dear Derrick, I hope this letter finds you well. I am glad we have finally come to the poin...

Hi Allen, Thank you for your comment. As I said, this is a very hard essay. I was trying to relate fulfilling life to a perfect society. This is why I discussed the requirements for a satisfactory life in the first paragraph by looking at three aspects-good salary, sense of security and sense of bel...

Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society? Indeed this quite a h...

Hi yhjsaber, This is my second paragraph. However, there are other important factors should be taken into consideration in choosing of a career. Firstly, a good working environment is a main contributing factor to job satisfaction. For example, many job seekers would like to work in a nice office w...

You have recently made a purchase from the local department store. However, when you arrived home, you found a fault with it. Write a letter to the manager, say what the product is, explain the problem and say what you'd like to be done about it. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the re...

Hi Allen,
Yeah, I was trying to modify it to my style, hope you could try it out.

When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. Do you agree or disagree? It is true that being able to access an abunance of money is one of the main elements affecting a person's decison when it comes to planing for a career. However, I would argue that factors such as ..... a...

Thanks Allen and Ryan, Yeah, I agree with you guys that the use of taken place and information exchange is not correct and appropriate. However, I do want to insist on supporting my view through looking at two different angles. I read from an article on BBC news that the main reasons for newspapers ...

Just like whether or not financial education should be made a necessary part of curriculum. If you were to focus only on the view that financial skills can be acquired spontenously without mentioning that most schools cannot spare time for financial education, people would claim that it is optional ...

Hi allen, I think discussing the advantages of e-media over material media is too narrow an approach. It feels like it is optional for people to choose one of them, which means paper based news and magazines can still be favoured by certain groups of people and consequently enjoy a considerable long...

A quick practice for today taking only 30 minutes. Printed newspapers and magazines will no longer exist. Do you agree or disagree? It is true that news and knowledge presented in the form of newspapers and magazines are still prevalent in the modern world. However, I believe that these means of inf...

And I reckon that we should focus on only one of two facets in the public sectors.

Hi Allen, Thanks for your comments, I was also confued by this question. My thoughts were if you were not to talk about the problems noises cause, how could you find appropriate solutions to these problems. I initially wanted to discuss about the causes only. However, without mentioning the problems...

My version It is true that the ever increasing noise level in many modern cities is causing more serious problem to residents’ life. There are several factors contributing to this trend and various measures could be taken by individuals and governments to improve the situation. The foremost reason f...

Thank you Flick and Allen. Grammar was indeed a pain in the ass for me. I have had to read 6 books and countless journal articles in the last two months in order for me to achieve this level. It looks like everything is paid off. By comparing the essays I wrote recently with those I did two months a...

Hi allen, I do see your efforts to improve your essay and I notice some similarirties between your and my essays, such as the use of certain words and the sentence structure. However, I do not think that the last sentence of the first paragraph connects to your main point in any way. It seems to me ...

Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is true that there are few opportunities for children to improve their financial capacity at school. However, I would oppose the view that financial education shou...

Hi allen,
Your letter looks very similar to one of the model answers in IELTS books. I am wondering if we are allowed to do the same in the real exam.

Some people say that children should be disciplined in their early age, and punishment should be used. To some extent do you agree? What kind of punishment can be used by teachers and parents? People hold different views as to whether or not punishment is an effective way to cultivate a well-behaved...