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Hi,
Rather evaluating your essay and re-writing the whole, I would suggest you to check the Ryan videos and follow that pattern.

To be honest, I rate it 5.5 only.

Can any one please suggest me some excercises, tips or some videos to improve my pronounication?

I will get my writing corrections from Ryan but I need an equivalent quality teach for my speaking evaluation?
Please recommend me some good teacher.

Thanks

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Thanks for the feedback.

1) Can you please correct the mistakes

OR

2) Can you assign a band?

Thanks.

Thanks for the feedback.

1) Can you please correct the mistakes
2) Can you assign a band?

Thanks.

Please correct my speaking to Ban 9

Sorry for using Vocaroo. The file size was too big to upload.


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What could have been improved to make my speaking band 9

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